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Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
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But great chapter though author it's actually great I'm already into it but me personally I'm not capable of telling lies I only tell the truth it might be hurtful but it's the truth. Indeep

He felt guilty in knowing that he might've devoured the original's soul and then occupied his body, but it wasn't like he did it voluntarily. He didn't even knew that he died!

Reincarnated as Zenkichi with a System

Reincarnated as Zenkichi with a System

Anime & Comics · FroztDouluo

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
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Well if he did he would've got his emotions that he felt before he died. But me personally I don't know but that's just me personally. Indeep

He felt guilty in knowing that he might've devoured the original's soul and then occupied his body, but it wasn't like he did it voluntarily. He didn't even knew that he died!

Reincarnated as Zenkichi with a System

Reincarnated as Zenkichi with a System

Anime & Comics · FroztDouluo

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

Oh really.... Noice

He didn't follow my novel seriously, and from what I saw today, he was really childish.

The Author is an Extra, The MC is a Reincarnator

The Author is an Extra, The MC is a Reincarnator

Fantasy · RaizarP

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

Yea I bet he did he had something cause he is a weeb my good men very much so indeed.

This person that was reincarnated as Zaiden hated my story, or he had a disease called hero complex and wanted to save the heroines that would die in the future.

The Author is an Extra, The MC is a Reincarnator

The Author is an Extra, The MC is a Reincarnator

Fantasy · RaizarP

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

Rule #1: Don't mess up the storyline Rule #2: Get strong enough to overpower the world's laws Rule #3: Act how you are supposed to act when being reincarnated because you never know what happens when you change things. These are all basic rules but I guess this mans here was a weeb in his life had to be. There was a reason why the author wrote the book like he did in the first place why change it. ( I'm just saying was he on drugs or not thinking at the time of his reincarnation?) But good job on the story so far Author I am loving it so far nothing wrong with it I'm just talking about "Zaiden" right now.

'I will save them all. I will not let them die…After all… I am a reincarnator. And it's my duty to save them.'

The Author is an Extra, The MC is a Reincarnator

The Author is an Extra, The MC is a Reincarnator

Fantasy · RaizarP

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

Had to get that out of my head first but good work on the story I love it so far I'm not going to tell a story. Thanks for the chapter bro hope you are doing well and see you later. Love

Coming out of the bus we were greeted by the scorching sun and the incredible view of the Oscorp main building. The outside of the building was made up of hexagonal glass panes and its height stretched to the sky. I had never been in front of such a tall building before. In this life, I had seen this building in the news sometimes but seeing it in reality, was a totally different experience. It didn't help that in my last life I lived with my family in the remote towns of England where even 3 story houses were rare.

Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller

Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller

Movies · Nyxio

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

Okay good work Author let me get this question out because when I looked at the building I thought of something. Why does Oscorp look like a Playstation 5

Coming out of the bus we were greeted by the scorching sun and the incredible view of the Oscorp main building. The outside of the building was made up of hexagonal glass panes and its height stretched to the sky. I had never been in front of such a tall building before. In this life, I had seen this building in the news sometimes but seeing it in reality, was a totally different experience. It didn't help that in my last life I lived with my family in the remote towns of England where even 3 story houses were rare.

Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller

Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller

Movies · Nyxio

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

So I seen u are a man of culture as well. But let this be known M has ears everywhere heard he even made some people di-

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Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

Rebirth in a New World is a good title I don't know but start with this first and then change it based off of what the first chapter is about. But good work Author keep it up, see you later, love bro/sis.

A/N:Anyone have any good ideas for a Title I can't think of a good one?

DC:The Strongest Survive

DC:The Strongest Survive

Anime & Comics · Mohammed_Jawad

Nasson_Smith_6965
Nasson_Smith_6965
2 years ago
Commented

You have done well so far Author its just that the chapters are short and needs to be a little more interesting other than that everything is good. Keep up the work, Love, and stay safe my brother/sister.

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Sakamoto days

Sakamoto days

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