i thought it was 'seasonal' instead of summer?
Agreed, constructive criticism is there so that the author could better his/her craft not demeaning them. At the end of the day it's their choice to take it or leave it as the power is on their hands.
Totally agree, mercy for those types of dh is an insult to the innocent
could you elaborate how the library cease to exist? whatever the reasoning author comes up with still doesn't feel 'sound' of mind at all
well, i wouldn't say he's a human before tho. he's kinda an evolved one so it probably wasn't what they 'define' human as in their mind
i hope that you will save that kid's mother lest he becomes a psycho like the original ones
what was the name again, anywhere door? doraemon would be proud
ahh, yea that would work with bits of manipulation here and there.
that was a nice development. tho i hope that the chapter would be longer. thx and cheers mate, may you have a nice week
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original Road of Fog
They said living is like walking in a thick layer of fog, you can neither see far ahead nor see upon the path you threaded upon. You never know if your step will lead you to a glorious or damnation end, heck you might not even reach the end. No one knows the future and no one would expect doomsday to occur. Yet it is now the reality of the inhabitants of a planet named Maia. Monsters show up, myths considered to be no more than empty stories appear and the position of the Apex species naturally shifts. What path should the humans take? Everything is shrouded by fog. Follows the journey of Link and his mates. Will he succumbs to hardship or tread-on throughout the unknown foggy path. Note: the image is not mine I just get it from google image. if you are the owner of the image message me and I will take it down.6 Chs 9 Collections
which point of mine stating that asoiaf was free of errors? even that guy said it a couple of times in an interview. but I do get your point, the other guy is professional and I understand that. My point was op saying it 'one of a kind' irked me. I jabbed at op instead of the author, if I wanted to say something to the author I wouldn't reply to another person's comment.
ASOIAF: King of Winter
Book&Literature · PrinceOfNilfheim