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Playing With Magic
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Synopsis
Wouldn't you just love to play with magic if you woke up in another world? Why settle for being a hero or a villain, when you could do so much more?
I wonder what I will become at the end of all this.
First fanfic. OP!OC. SI/OC. Self Insert.
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This fanfiction contains elements of Harry Potter, Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim, and more.
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Enjoy!
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Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, Elder Scrolls or any other works used in this fanfiction aside from the original characters and ideas used.
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Could not read past chapter 2. Chatgpt is way too annoying. MC says he is an adult but act and thinks like a lost naive child.
So far so good. The pre-Hogwarts setup is over. Story is well written well above the normal level of what is found on Webnovel. Can’t wait to see where this goes.
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Hello there! Just wanted to thank you guys for reading. You guys are awesome!💯 Enjoy the rest of your day!😁
Much of the story feels off an unnatural. There are also missing commas, and incorrect sentences that can easily lead to misunderstandings, are all over in just the first chapter alone. And the biggest, most relevant issue is the authors use of the annoying [-]-[P]-[W]-[M]-[-] Like what the freak is that? Why is that all over the place for? I can't read this story even if I wanted to with this being pasted in-between every single paragraph. It's ruins the experience and is blatantly in the way.
I don't know if it's your writing style or if you're using ChatGPT, but it's too flowery for me. The system and MC seem alright, I guess, but I didn't read past three chapters because of the writing.