Maxwell_Joseph_8815

Maxwell_Joseph_8815

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Maxwell_Joseph_8815
1 months ago
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I think he should get the tantra, the qi sense technique, and the Everwood array formation. The tantra because even if he can’t fully use it now he could use it for more direction with his bloodline and to improve the tantra he already uses. The qi sense technique because after learning it it might be able to help him bring all of his different paths into one cohesive whole, even if not I would probably improve his qi cultivation and techniques. And lastly the Everwood arry formation because it could be used to improve the cove, maybe improve the farm, but something could happen if the book that he had found in the farm. The manual that also comes with the array formation would probably also help him a lot in developing his array progression.

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Maxwell_Joseph_8815
1 years ago
Commented

You “start anew” with a new book by using the edited chapters, maybe

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Maxwell_Joseph_8815
1 years ago
Posted

I really like the concept but the story is too fast paced. There should be some time to go into detail about what is happening more world building. For example the MC has gotten a lot of high tier ablities but hardly uses them or when he does use them the entire scene is only a couple sentences long. It also seems like the MC is being powered-up too quickly, he has gotten to very powerful legacies in the first 15 chapters but there was almost no trials to get the legacies and all that comes with them.

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