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Synopsis

Late 21st century, the acclaimed game Company Elden Throne released yet another immersive action MMORPG after a decade of silence.
While the world was getting ready for this new Supermassive MMO, Dale Houston trained his body every day in preparation for its eventual worldwide release.
Not because Dale wanted to get healthy or muscular, but because he saw a glimpse of the secrets hidden by the Megacorporation.
All because of what he found out one year ago... This time, he wasn't here to play the game.
He would find all of the secrets, things he couldn't even imagine...
It wasn't about the game anymore.
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*Author's thoughts:

So! What this is actually about?

As you read in the Title, there was an old version of this work going by the same name.
Because of some problems, I had to leave it alone for a few months, and after I came back I realized neither I nor my readers remembered much, so I decided to go from the start again.
I'll be re-editing every single chapter I made to make a more conclusive story while also tying up loose plot points and bringing them forward as I re-reading through everything.

As in the synopsis, this is an MMORPG story with a big emphasis on the real world and how the game affects reality in more than a socio-economic way, so this isn't the story about a guy playing a game and getting rich with a bit of drama.
This is a story about how the game impacts the real world and vice versa.
A story about a secret so big it could change society and the world... No, it will.
The Mc isn't a chosen one and instead was someone who found something out of his own effort and the story progresses from that point, you can take it as he being favored by the plot, but at the very least this is a better plot initiative then the boy who survived Avada Kedavra through the power of Love... Just kidding, Harry is sick.
There will be a few more explanations to help you with understanding his personality and goals better.
No romance planned for at least the first 200 chapters, however, we'll have some candidates as we go by including, you could say, a Main Female lead.
But there are plans for interactions with other players and side characters as we go by.
The story will be divided into 2 parts, we are currently on the first part and the focus is on the game.
Don't misunderstand, getting out of the game to do something in real life doesn't mean we are going through a phase, you'll know once it happens.
Things may change along the way but that's how things are.

The main aspect of this series is about Dale exploring this new world, Azimuth while building up his forces that will eventually become a Kingdom.
At least the first part of it.

*Extra: (Not currently active due to me restarting the Novel)

From now on I'll be doing power stones goals.
100PS - 1 Extra Chapter
350PS - 2 Extra Chapters
550PS - 3 Extra Chapters
900PS - 5 Extra Chapters

Afterthoughts:

If you read this far, I have 2 more novels that I am updating with this one, check them out as well! They are quite decent.
One is a Danmachi Fanfic, they say its quite decent -> In Danmachi with Plasmids
The other one is almost a stand-alone story, but due to some elements, I used my morals to say it a Fanfic, despite some readers saying I should've done otherwise -> Zero Fate against the World

Links:

If you wish to talk with me directly, I have a Discord, so go there and see for yourself.
https://discord.gg/zpAgtPBAMK
If the link does not work, I can always update it.
I'm also planning on the far future making a P@treon for this work for those that truly like it and wish to support me.
Bye!

* The cover image is not mine and if you are the author of it, make sure to contact me and I will remove it.

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Thee_AngryBird

not bad... a good read ... 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Jmp0330
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wow i wonder how this review got here. personally haven't read it yet but the authors work is very good and saw the concept behind this story. give it a shot.

2yr
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Nano99

I normally don't write a review for a book, so I hope it's not too messy. Since I'm not really a fan of the scoring system on Webnovel, you can pretty much ignore that part. First of all, I really like your story so far and hope you will continue writing. The story is well paced and I really like some of the gimmicks you built into the book. For ex. that hardcore players appear like NPCs or more recently, that he killed the snake instead of gainig a super OP pet snake with a hidden dragon bloodline... Which doesn't mean that I'm against a cool pet companion. Just do it right please. There are some grammar mistakes, but nothing really noteworthy, since they don't interrupt the reading flow. The updates are good I guess? I just binge read everything as soon as I found the novel. But from what I can see, it's stable enough. In most cases, the story is a hit or miss for me. In this case it's a hit. The genre of videogame novels or more precisley VR Games is nothing new and I guess most people who are reading your story already read one in the past. What destroys most of those stories for me are their utterly absurd amout of stats/numbers and boring plot armor that saves the MCs everytime. That's the reason why I like Dale, who spent a really long time training himself, starting in a higher leveled village. I like it even more, that he might be strong physically but doesn't have the knowledge in the fighting aspect (techniques). It's too early to really score the character design and the world background so I will work with what we already have. For the characters, we only have some information to Dale and some of the NPCs in Resko. Even then, step by step we learn more of the characters and their wishes and goals. I hope that even Dale will be more fleshed out as soon as he isn't in this constant race with the other players anymore and we will have the time to know more about his beliefs outside his wish to get stronger. Hislast dialogue with David was really interesting, since his worldview is already changing. The world of Azimuth has so much potential. We didn't even get to the Elden Throne part in the title yet and are still inside this little village somewhere in the south, but I'm already captivated by the world building. The world is huge, with the main continent still not entirely explored and many other continents still waiting. The real strength of the natives are not yet shown and I'm really interested to know, if there are other fantasy races. At the end, I really hope that there will be minimal to none romance, as the author already mentioned in the synopsis. If there is a romantic realationship planned for Dale, at least don't make it harem. Please just let him be with one woman... Harem is by far one of the worst trends of Webnovel and what destroys most of my reading experience on this site. As some final words to the author, even if this novel might not be the most popular on the site (right now), I will continue reading and I'm pretty sure others too. Thanks for reading until here and have a nice day :)

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Sleeping_Giant

the story isn't that fast nor slow I think it's on the right track the story doesn't enter the game in the first chapter it's great that you put a backstory before the mc even went to play the game

2yr
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JP7345

so I really enjoyed this story, the author does a really good job of building up the world and the game in general through I do think the tutorial section was a little bit rushed and would have been better if the actions of the character were told less and shown more. I really like where the story seems to be going and have high hopes for the future of this novel. I also would recommend the rest of the author's books as well as those are also top quality books.

2yr
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Soulreaper22

It's a really great story that elevates the genre of a system in real-life and the VR game to a higher level. The only bad thing about the story is that the MC doesn't have any supporting cast yet, so it's a bit boring to read the MC's thoughts and actions, there needs to be a little romance or comradery with others. But the story is still new so it might come up in future chapters.

2yr
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WickedQueen2

You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed. My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.

2yr
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PursueImmortality

Found about this story from the authors main account(Abadom) in one of his ff, zero fate, cos i couldnt wait for a week for the ff to update. Although i havnt read it yet im pretty hopeful since all of author’s other ffs are well written and the plot is god-tier. Overall im excited to start.

1yr
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Hawk_4871

for the author I have two words "*uck you" I was almost late work today on other news love the story ........,......................... ........ gg . ggdtjcigifigigitjdhdhridhtoditjdjfjfjtotox

1yr
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myfriend

You should really read this novel 69 nice Some words words words and words I like words so that words are words is word it is words what words are words I word so words I don't words like words

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Zenta_N

Great so far absolutely love it👍 also cover sauce? now dots... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . ... .. .. .. .. .. .... .. .. .. .... .. .. .. ..

2yr
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iamalpharious

I bloody love this novel at the moment. Everything so far is very well written and I really hope you continue your awesome job. Looking forward for more!

1yr
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antonio_montenegro

I really liked the story, but I'll have to abandon it, I don't speak and understand English. But if you upload this to another platform I will read it, if I can translate it obviously

1yr
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Kyliantheman

Just read the entire thing in one go. This novel is amazing and deserves a place in my favorite reads. Really, I got addicted to reading this and now I'm sad I caught up. I love the fact that the MC behaves like an NPC, I'd liked to see more novels like this. Overall, I really recommend this novel. I'm surprised I didn't read this earlier. Anyway, I'd like to see more of your work dear Author, keep up the good work.

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Alex_Boen

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Hybridite

Really have enjoyed it so far overall its really good my only concerns are the quality of the romance because I have read this other author that does romance really well and now its hard to read any other story with subpar romance. Anyhow one last thing not including flash backs the past nearly 100 chapters have taken place in almost 1 REAL LIFE DAY. You don't need to but for my sanity I would appreciate it if you spread out the story canonically a little bit like keep the story the same pace just make the says pace faster. Still really good though.

1yr
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Zizozero

story is very good so far I like it very much

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Alibi_Lullaby

idk what to write but so far it's very good and I love it 😀💛💕💓💗❤😀💛💕💓💗❤😀💛💕💓💗❤😀💛💕💓💗❤😀💛💕💓💗❤😀💛💕💓💗❤😀💛💕💗❤😀a 90.

2yr
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DaoistabyxBA

I see that the author is doing everything in order to increase the quality of the novel, the story is interesting even tho some parts are missing, the 5 stars are to encourage the novel and the author for the good work so far.

1yr
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