monke6

monke6

male LV 4
2020-09-23 Joint Global
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monke6
monke6
10 hours ago
Posted

the author has a decent idea but he drags everything out for so long it becomes boring because most if the chapters im just skimming through. Also theres too many grammar problems or just weirdly written sentences it ruins the story. im nearly on chapter 50 and so far we know almost nothing about the mc and his strength and the author just says he'll explain more in the future but after almost 50 chapters we shouldve already known a lot more of the mc but 90% of the chapters are based on the golden trio, so if you want to read a story where the mc barely does anything and the plot is extremely slow then this is for you but if you want to see a troy where the mc actually changes the plot and uses it to his advantage then this isnt for you.

monke6
monke6
10 days ago
Commented

will he do any other bloodmagic like rituals to make him or his dragon stronger?

monke6
monke6
10 days ago
Commented

will you make him swap eyes with fugaku so they both get ems? also you should make itachi focus on something else aswell not just genjutsu.

monke6
monke6
11 days ago
Commented

+1

monke6
monke6
12 days ago
Commented

will you ever start updating this again?

monke6
monke6
20 days ago
Replied to yogesh07

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monke6
monke6
20 days ago
Commented

+1

monke6
monke6
23 days ago
Commented

its a good chapter i cant think of anything wrong with it tbh

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AN: This chapter was pretty hard to write and I kinda did it in a hurry. I don't think it came up exactly like I wanted to, but I hope you like it anyway. I might end up rewriting it based on your feedback (don't worry, I won't make any serious edits without telling you), so please tell me what you think of it and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

monke6
monke6
24 days ago
Commented

tftc. im pretty sure u dont need ink and paper at the higher levels of sealing.

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monke6
monke6
26 days ago
Commented

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And for people who want to choose to go with 2 option comment here. 

Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

Book&Literature · Daeranyx_Drakonar