Stand-alone i's in a sentence need to be capitalized; otherwise, the story starts well!
A grin soon spread across my face as i laughed to myself "This will be fun"
Naruto: His Ambition
Anime & Comics · KieraKieraARTZ
Well long term a Zubat is the best option but for the sake of being different from a lot of the other team rocket mc fics maybe go for ekans, Grimer or even Rattata.
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Points*, Powerful (You only need one L), and personally I think emotions should have lowercase e's instead uppercase ones but you can keep Emotional Energy since its the name of something.
[ The MS will get Modification Pionts through Emotional Energy. The more powerfull the Emotion´s are the more points you will get. They are no exceptions all Emotions will get points. ]
Reborn in Highschool DxD with Modification System
Anime & Comics · Daoist294070
Stand alone I's need to be capitalized 👍🏾
The soul asked"where am i,didn't i die?"
Black clover:The Black Swordsman
Anime & Comics · Amaterasu_
It might just be me but "my life slowly slipping away from me" feels too descriptive too early. Or maybe just doesn't sound right? You could have said "My blood slowly seeping onto the ground"
As my body is lying down with its life slowly slipping away. I look up and see the face of the cause of all of this, this annoying shit face.
Pokemon: living the life of a Team Rocket grunt isn't so bad
Anime & Comics · Kevin_Henriquez
show* (no offense)
'Show them what you can do Naruto, ehow the villagers how strong you've become and how wrong they are about you.' Hiruzen thought as Genma who was down at the arena looked up at him.
Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
Anime & Comics · some_writer
Stand alone I's should be capitalize and 'fanfic I read in' you could just change to fanfic I read there is absolutely no need for the word in.
'Is this really a system, like in the novels and fanfic i read in' I cant believe its happening to me, and who the actual f**k presses decline to this question. Heh, even then it provides a safe exit for those poor souls who press decline. With that thought I pressed <ACCEPT>.
DARKS(DxD)
Anime & Comics · readers_viewpoint
do you be violet?
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Ryu: Konoha's Black Dragon
Anime & Comics · Thereddude
intervene*
"Yeah...Yes, I'm in danger, intervense!"- He cry in panic, after which he screamed and closing his eyes in pain, when the monster's teeth clung to his leg.
Pokemon: Ascension
Anime & Comics · KrisUnderworld
This is a copy of the previous paragraph?
Pokemon: Journey to The Top
Anime & Comics · The_Great_BoredOne