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Black clover:The Black Swordsman

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Auteur: Amaterasu_

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This is my first fanfiction.I started it to learn English and waste time I wanted to try writing my own fanfiction so I decided to start this one and i apologize if my grammar is bad

i hope you enjoy it


the story is about a teenager who was hospitalized all his life due to a heart disease.

and after he died he met an old man who granted him wishes and reincarnated him in the world of black clover.


i dont own black clover or any thing in the book

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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Shanksxx

Interesting, I really liked it, I hope it continues and doesn't abandon the story like many authors, I just felt that something was missing about the character's background, despite him having died in a hospital in his previous life, I'm missing a backstory for him, could you puts some characteristics or peculiarities about him in his past life, as a kind of quote, to give an in-depth look at the protagonist's own history, otherwise I'm enjoying it, and quoting again, I hope it continues as often as possible. S2

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JD_William_Grant

Good book. I like the wishes he chose. The first few chapters are a little short, but it is a good book to read

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