Thanks for the chapter!
I still don't understand why this is going into this incredible level of detail when you could finish it with a summary because while I understand that you want to flush out the characters, you are sidelining your MC in the majority of the events and having MC be a side character at best not doing anything significant in this verse (Harry Potter) except to train. while that would be great normally you chose to have this a multiverse story so he has basically been stuck in this verse for about 50 chapters give or take a few. so my question is why not summarize some of the details so you can get to the really cool parts of a multiverse stories missing with the plots!
"How scandalous," Darkness moaned under his gaze, even as she pulled the yellow overdress off and the armour attached to it, "A noble knight of chivalry like myself, being forced to strip by such a young boy just because he was lucky to be born strong." yet, despite her words, her eyes heavy with lust met his own and she reached down and in one motion relieved herself of her bodysuit, the only part of her outer war she was still wearing, being her boots and arm bracers.
Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
Peter Parker, a 16 years old highschool student. Currently, he was locked up in his small room. The walls in the room were filled with lots of superhero posters. Iron Man, Captain America, Grandpa Universe. They were his idols. He wanted to be like them someday.
Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]
Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
honestly Authur you will always have haters but the story and quality are always on point and the ideas that you have are always fresh so just ignore haters, Haters are gonna hate. However, everything you write is great, and good job on being constant with chapter releases
Like have a main form that is a combination of his other forms ex ears of an elf horns of the Kijin wings of the harpy but have all that in one form just an idea
I really like the rewrite it fixed a lot of the problems I saw in the first one although can you do something for his main form like it will reflect all his subordinates like you did in the previous one. Anyway awesome story you’re totally killing it 😀
I think you should outline things you want the MC to achieve in this story and after that try to work toward that goal like do you want to do what Leon did or take the Rimuru route, there is the multiversal route as well if you like but just going on blindly would create a lot of plot holes that you would need to fix. also, it doesn't need a structured goal and outline. Good Luck!!
Thanks for the Chapter. Really enjoyed the idea of this book! I have a question about the progression of the story. Is the main character going to different universes, or is he in DXD until further notice? Will he gain powers from other worlds or be stuck with his current power set?
DxD - Multiverse | The Day To Day Life Of The Sephiroth Hero
Anime & Comics · Barbatos_18