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Apocalyptic Insanity
Horror · bleed_tu
extremely, I'm two years younger than this guy and I've also watched NatGeo wild from a young age and even I would consider that stupid. Honestly this is one thing I hate about novels with teenage mc's you authors always make use dumber than we actually are, like dude I'm young not brain dead.
Mark could not kill a crow, because he made the mistake of watching a documentary about crows when he was young. In that documentary, they explained that crows had deep feelings and had the intelligence similar to a kid of seven years old. After that documentary, he even wanted to have a crow as a pet, but his father denied his request because crows were wild animals, and should stay free.
Reverend Apocalypse
Fantasy · kommers
those=>this
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Reverend Apocalypse
Fantasy · kommers
honestly author the story so far seems interesting but I think you need to work a bit more on you grammar it definitely needs improvement
While your still brainstorming why don't you show us Ailetta's stats i'm just dying to see it, and if I could make an input Ailetta's class is essentially a summoner like Jasmine (that's if I'm not wrong) that's why she can summon that black blob that she uses to control the dead then in my opinion the path that would fit Ailetta would be the witch path which would be a combination of her summoner class and her ability to manipulate both the dead and the living ( I say the living bios I'm sure that the black blob can also control people by erasing their will once it enters them)
I been wondering if the system is only available to those from otherworlds then how do the people of this world get stronger?, also is it possible to create new skills instead of simply relying on already existing skills, it would make the people of this world feel more involved in the workings of the system and also makes it feel like they earned their power through constant hardwork.
Yeah that's actually a problem in some chapters because went a conversation is happening between more than two people it is hard to keep track of who is talking so the dialogue gets hard to follow, in my opinion it would be better to indicate when someone new enters a conversation it would help a lot
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The Otome Game’s Extra
Fantasy · NovelDude
Yeah sorry to bust your bubble but not all parents simply throw away their kids like that, if that was true there won't be any parents with children that have various forms of defects(physical and mental) after all most of those kids would either end up being a orphaned or killed.
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The Otome Game’s Extra
Fantasy · NovelDude
pls what's the name of the new class and when did it first appear?, I don't think I was paying enough attention this past few chapters 😅
I'm glad this is finally back
〚Master of Centipedes〛
Action · IAmNotVoid