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Becoming a Monster

Fantasy 164 Chapitres 1.0M Affichage
Auteur: Valtura

4.44 (48 audimat)

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In a post-apocalyptic fantasy world layered into multiple realms, humanity faces extinction due to their endangerment of the main realm. Forced to merge all realms back into one, a deity grants humans a leveling system to empower them, lest they become extinct when facing the mythical creatures. Noah, our protagonist, embraces the role of a monster tamer, trading his humanity for strength and eventually transforming into a monster himself. As Noah struggles with his evolving identity, he must navigate a world where the line between human and monster becomes increasingly blurred.




Feedback is definitely appreciated, good or bad, lets make the story good together.

I will like to note that the main character isn’t completely ruthless like some of you may want. There’s a lot of stories out there with ruthless, bloodthirsty, cold hearted main characters so if that’s what your interest in then I’m sorry to disappoint you.

Release chapters will only be one chapter a day on weekdays. The releases will become more consistent depending on how well the story does.

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    Nukame17

    Good story! You actually made de mc loss of humanity seem realistic, considering the circumstances and all the characters feel alive too. The only bad thing about the story so far is that there are not enough chapters.

    2yr
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    LegolasGreenleaf

    I came here to check why no chapter was posted for awhile to see this situation. It is unfortunate that this novel is being harassed by trolls or the woke crowd. Example someone saying how mc is simp cause he kills males but not females ect yet the novel shows his mindset on what he is thinking for his actions not to mention he has killed plenty indirectly of both male and female. Also he doesn’t kill the males at times also and even saves them for benefits. Mc personality is about growing stronger and doing things that will benefit him though we still see his internal struggles and how he is growing. TLDR Most if not all low reviews are just trolls or what people consider the woke crowd attacking the novel as you will notice the same thing being repeated on the low reviews like simp or mtl (if this is mtl then I wish all mtl was like this) Hope the author gets this resolved and comes back as it is a good novel. Ps I am obviously a bot account that has been undercover for years just for this moment is probably what the negative reviewers(The ones that are like the ones I describes above) would say.

    2yr
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    Violent

    I'm starting to love this novel you can feel the sanity of the main character and what makes him human slowly drifting away it’s a great experience and I hope other people find this novel and support it.

    2yr
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    Timothy_Kirkland

    Why are the good novels being dropped?😔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔😔. It was jus getting good too.

    2yr
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    HaracasAye

    Writing is okay, there are some areas where grammar is lacking making it hard to understand. The setting is your generic apocalypse scenario, system and all. The story is wierd, and I cant decide if its fast or slow paced. Each chapter has action and conflict but is somehow takes ages to resolve. Eg chapters 10 thru 17 are spent on a single conflict and with the length of the chapters thats alot of words for what amounts to taming a spider and fighting one man. The mc is disappointing. At the very least I expect the author to keep their mcs personality and decisions consistent with their purported backstory but I guess thats too much to ask here. Tldr. He's a rich kid that spent his life living up to his parents expectations. He has no friends, he's bullied blah blah, u know the usual edgy template we see everywhere nowadays. Problem is as soon as the apocalypse starts, he goes full sociopath. I mean cmon at least show some disgust or emotion after you bash your roomates head in other than catharsis. His subsequent interactions with individuals and internal monolouge come off as hasty, compulsive, comedic, whimsical even. This is not how someone shunned by society acts in any scenario. Of course, when the plot calls for it, he will magically start exhibiting traits and thoughts owing to his absuive upbringing if only to skew the story in a particular direction.

    2yr
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    Sadist_mc_fan

    this is sooooo good!!! it is the best apocalypse LN i have read (their is also orv so yah) but really great i recommend people to definitely read this Also Author when are you gonna update the chapters i have waited for so long for other chapters

    1yr
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    Andrew303300

    I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways: Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it. Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.

    2yr
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    DgodRequiem

    Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one

    2yr
    Voir 0 Réponses
    Whatthejug_0221

    The writing quality is better than average, especially compared to a lot of novels I've read. Story development is alright, I like the fact that we also get to experience some of the struggles from the other characters, which to me is a sort of baseline of how well the mc is doing. Character design isn't the best but it's not bad, not much detail goes into the description of the characters but it's enough to imagine how they look. Updating stability can sometimes be inconsistent from what I see but as the author has a job that's to be expected, it's impressive that chapters are realeased often to begin with which means a lot of the author's free time goes into this. I respect the dedication, it reveals his compassion towards this novel. Now for world background I'm going to use the description of the area the mc starts off in as there hasn't been anything pass that yet. The descriptions are good, we get a good idea of the campus and the layout of the place, which really is all we need. Although there could be better descriptions of the area to help visualize for the reader. Overall I'm really enjoying the story so far. Though I am a bit worried of the change of personality in the mc, he's becoming a bit less "insane" then he was originally started off ever since the introduction of the love interest. None the less I'm excited to see where the story is going, keep it up author!

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    2yr
    Voir 1 Réponses
    jason_minchue

    This was quickly growing to be my next favorite book, sadly realized it's no longer being updated.

    1yr
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    Avinar

    I love it ........................................................................................................................................................

    2yr
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    Suspicious_Otter

    one of the best ones ive read. i really enjoyed the opening arc. i wish the author would continue with this story. ill keep checking back periodically and looking forward to more.

    1yr
    Voir 0 Réponses
    Jishu_Anime

    this is a top tier apocalypse novel. everything is just perfect but why the f. . author isn't updating new chapters? did he drop it or not, it's already been over 5 months and there's no news 😞😞

    1yr
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    Storyteller_0

    I like it, unless your looking for perfection, you’ll enjoy this story if you came here for what I think you came here for like the rest of us, so come on and just enjoy the read, I’m sure it won’t disappoint

    1yr
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    Kyle_Alton

    One of the best books I have read on this app. can't wait for more chapters to come out. this book isn't like others i have read on hear, but reading something different just makes it better. 😃

    1yr
    Voir 0 Réponses
    Volvette

    great story highly intriguing kept me waiting for every next chapter with great anticipation and also the character design isn't very bland.

    2yr
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    VoidSeeker2

    love the book here's a review the book for me is extremely good so far the only issues I might have with it is that their is way to many skills and it's very hard to keep track of them. also I hope you feel better I mean that one non gender specific being was calling you homophobic and I got a good laugh out of that one lol

    2yr
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    Jose_Quintero_9445

    Sinseramente la historia esta muy buena pero hay un problema a partir del capitulo 40 en donde tienes que desbloquear lo desbloqueo y me sale la letra en chino y después en ingles y como solo entiendo español a la hora de usar google traductor las letras me van a cuenca y es con todos los capitulo

    2yr
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    Parker_Goad

    grate.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................''MAANNNNAA BOOOLLT!!!!!''...LOL

    2yr
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    Dunaris
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    I normally don't write reviews, but I had to for this novel. I haven't enjoyed a novel this much in a while. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens next.

    2yr
    Voir 1 Réponses

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