Acabei rápido de mais.
Obrigado pelo capítulo.
Obrigado pelos capítulos. Essa fanfic é bem reconfortante de ser lida.
Não desanime você tem bastante talento, só precisa organizar a direção da história.
Sinto que o MC é muito aberto com seus segredos.
Well, what can I say? It started off well. Everyday life was calm, he was getting stronger and not getting too involved with the supernatural world. Everything seemed good, everything great. Then I feel the first mistake came: the kidnapping. I thought it was very forced and made no sense. Even so, it was still readable. However, the story kept getting worse, skipping most of the training and "torture," which should have been significant to the plot. After that, it only showed him completing a single mission. Then, suddenly, a year and a half of missions passed, which makes no sense at all. Then came, for me, the worst mistake: the joke involving his mother. That was the breaking point that made me drop the story. The plot started to get confusing, as if the author wanted to mix universes or parallel worlds, which was a bad idea since he hadn’t even properly developed the world the character was living in. It was going well until it wasn’t anymore. .Traduzido pelo chat gpt.
Estragou demais aqui. Complicou tudo com essa piada sem sentido.
Sim, eu entendo. Não estou jugando, só sinto que a história ficou bem menos imersiva, com as repetições de palavras nesses casos.
Aqui você viajou totalmente, nem tem sentido o que você está fazendo.
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