InfinityWolfS2

InfinityWolfS2

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Um pouco de leitura faz bem.

2020-04-03 Joint Brazil
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InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
5 days ago
Commented

Aqui você viajou totalmente, nem tem sentido o que você está fazendo.

InfinityWolfS2
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InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
9 days ago
Commented

Obrigado pelos capítulos. Essa fanfic é bem reconfortante de ser lida.

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
10 days ago
Replied to Er_moon

Não desanime você tem bastante talento, só precisa organizar a direção da história.

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
10 days ago
Commented

Sinto que o MC é muito aberto com seus segredos.

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
11 days ago
Posted

Well, what can I say? It started off well. Everyday life was calm, he was getting stronger and not getting too involved with the supernatural world. Everything seemed good, everything great. Then I feel the first mistake came: the kidnapping. I thought it was very forced and made no sense. Even so, it was still readable. However, the story kept getting worse, skipping most of the training and "torture," which should have been significant to the plot. After that, it only showed him completing a single mission. Then, suddenly, a year and a half of missions passed, which makes no sense at all. Then came, for me, the worst mistake: the joke involving his mother. That was the breaking point that made me drop the story. The plot started to get confusing, as if the author wanted to mix universes or parallel worlds, which was a bad idea since he hadn’t even properly developed the world the character was living in. It was going well until it wasn’t anymore. .Traduzido pelo chat gpt.

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
11 days ago
Commented

Estragou demais aqui. Complicou tudo com essa piada sem sentido.

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2
18 days ago
Replied to Ahmed_Koroma_1382

Sim, eu entendo. Não estou jugando, só sinto que a história ficou bem menos imersiva, com as repetições de palavras nesses casos.

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    Ninja School Teacher: Growing Stronger Through Teaching

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    Mu Yue, a newly graduated teacher, is transported to the ninja world of Naruto, where he becomes an ordinary chuunin and a member of the feared Root Organization led by Danzo. To avoid becoming just another disposable pawn in Danzo's plans, Mu Yue dedicates himself to teaching at the Konoha Ninja School, discovering a mysterious teacher system that allows him to grow stronger through teaching. Upon awakening the teacher system, Mu Yue receives rewards for his successful classes. His first achievement, an A-rated teaching session, grants him mastery over the change in fire chakra properties. Under his guidance, promising students like Uchiha Shisui, Obito, and Might Guy begin to excel. Influenced by Mu Yue's teachings, Shisui learns that the village's enemies can be both outside and inside Konoha. Obito overcomes his reputation as the weakest in the ninja school, while Guy becomes a taijutsu master even earlier. Mu Yue navigates the dangers and moral dilemmas of being a ninja teacher in a world full of intrigues, battles, and sacrifices. He inspires his students to question the true essence of the Will of Fire, challenging hollow rhetoric and discovering their own paths to strength and survival. "Remembering that this is just a machine translation, let me know if it's readable so I can continue or discard this story." I'm not the author, just a random translator. I will look for the original author, if I find it, I will post it here. If anyone knows who it is, please comment below.

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