/ Urban / The middle-aged man.
4.77 (18 audimat)
Synopsis
What happens when an average American middle-aged man, father of two high school girls and a high school teacher, gets a system that makes him attractive to single women? Watch how he makes love and babies with the women who come for him. He gets rich every time he makes a woman visit Cloud Nine. This story has taboos, but at least it doesn't have cheating in any forum, so there's that.
NONE OF THE PEOPLE IN THIS NOVEL ARE REAL. EVERYTHING IS FANTASY.
*contains 18+ adult content*
MC's Main kink is Race play, so do be warned.
in*est father x daughter
school teacher x student
widow
divorced milfs
BDSM
Many Taboo s*x, you have been warned.
Emotional control (i.e., the girls will be affected by him to be prone to lust after him but won't lose the free will to turn him down until they have already slept with him)
*what it won't contain*
NTR or its other forums for cheating
R*pe
mind control
(I am going through and fixing spelling and other issues, so please bear with it. English isn't my strong suit. I have finished fixing all the chapters that I have put up to the best of my ability, and I don't know how good Grammarly is. So I won't say it's perfect, but it's an improvement over before.)
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Écrire un avisUpdate bought up to 120 and gotta say imma wait til 200 or 230 before I continue cause I got sucked In. Please also try to give some more depth to the women. Or try your best to cause I know they are numerous. But it’s like at some point his daughters take a full back seat. I’m hoping for a yandere character. No violence from her but maybe she line kidnaps him and he seduces his way out of being trapped with her…. Just throwing that out there lol
Spoiler de révélationhi, I recently read your book and I really like it, all my stones will go to this book, continue and don't give up on it[img=Loving it] [img=Loving it]
Shameless author here, I would like to thank you for reading my novel. And any helpful advice would me most appreciated. I would like to thank y'all once again.
Hey dude your missing the tattoo artist in your harem list just now noticed during the re read. Also check your author comments. I left you a comment.
It would be really great if the author writes the mc's and his late wife's past as a side story, and his daughters' childhood ( from young age to 17 yo) as a side story.
It’s really good sorry to spam. I commented on a bunch of the pics the yandere pic needs work. Plus there’s some you know you gotta get to etc. but I’m just happy with it all. Hope some of my pic comments made you laugh
Congrats on reaching 200 - I hope to see plenty of highschool arcs. So many pigtails. Don’t neglect Anna & friends plus the highschool girls he has already. You really gotta set up a discord with character photos.
This is an amazing story so far. Waiting to see more of the harem development and how they will help the MC. I really recommend it. Keep up the amazing work, Author.
With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.
Writing this as of Chapter 209. The story is pretty good and interesting. In my opinion we can't get familiar with many of the girls because they have very little screen time or their appearances are too far apart. Sometimes it feels like he forgets about some girls (like the sorority house). as for the writing it's a little fast paced but keeps you in constant excitement but, most of the time the sentences become too long. Also, Punctuation is kinda rough. But overall it's a very entertaining story that gets you excited and keeps you waiting for the next update. A very solid 4/5 read
Keep them coming. Aaaaasaah ya This book keeps getting better. Also please look at the last comment I made.
Auteur Ahmed_Koroma_1382
this book is so dope! please author, keep updating coz you have just gotten yourself a new fan