I can tell English isn't your first language, but saying more stronger...is bad writing. I wish you well on your book, but after struggling through the first 4 chapters, I am dropping it. the POV is all over the place. It is hard to keep track of who is doing what. it just doesn't seem like it will improve. It is not structured well at all.
isn't he still 4?
When I was 4 years old, my father taught me swordsmanship.
Increase Talent: Become More Stronger!
Fantasy · DylanHusand
this is a redundant paragraph.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills
Fantasy · Elias_Nightwalker
Damn, I never even considered twins!
I'm gonna start counting how many times this is said each chapter. I know we haven't gotten this drilled into our heads yet, so let's see how many times he has to say it before we realize what the MC loves and wants.
thrill of battle, the taste of victory, and the dance of power that could only be found within the World Towers.
Crimson Tower
Fantasy · HaozDancer
yeah, author is definitely, very, verbose.
As an aspiring Martial Artist and a lover of Martial Art. The impact of politics in Gaea would likely have a much greater impact on him, should he succeed in becoming a Martial Artist, than it did back on Earth. After all, back on Earth, he was nobody. Just another cog among another 320,000,000 or so Americans. But as a Martial Artist, he would be part of militaristically 'elite' one-percent.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
I feel like here he should explain why.
I cant wait for a full fight from this guy, but I'm a patient man.
The air seemed filled with afterimages of Elorin. Many tried to swipe at them, only to hit nothing but empty air and lose their lives in the next instant.
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec
I love this book. I love this book so much.
Hey, are you waiting to release chapters till you have the rest of the final arc finished?
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec