The racism stuff was just a joke, dud...
Too bad, can't vote on this book yet. It's not supported with power stones. Fix that issue first. Will say this now: as long as you're still on the vetting process, you won't get the views or votes you deserve. Don't worry tho, it'll last only for 3 to five days.
So, I saw you request a review in the Forums. Since I'm bored, I'm here to write a review on a novel with a single chapter of 2k words. Anyway, I'm half-asleep when I read CH.1, so please bear with me. Bout' the writing quality - top tier! Yeah, I haven't seen someone write good Engrishu on this site for a while. There's no criticism for the wording, but... except Edward... I wasn't given a name. So I was confused reading through his and hers without signs who was who. But still, kinda' like a prologue maybe, so there aren't any names yet, or at least that's what I observed after reading it a single time. Oof, minus points! I was confused! That's a sign of bad writing. JK! Story... I didn't understand shit! Is the author Mexican? Spanish? There were some words I didn't understand. I think they are there as intended, but maybe they're from another language or something... Well, I think the story was good, if I was able to understand it better. As I said, I was half asleep. Hmm... There's nothing to criticize really... There are many to be praised. But this is still a single chptr'd novel, I'll update if it gets updated a little bit more too. One question tho: Is this book for some kind of meme or something? A thug gorilla person? Eren's shirt? You mean Eren from AOT? Cap positioned sideways - and the beastman who wore it was apparently as a gorilla? Is this racism from the author? No, of course, it's not. I was just skeptical. Now, there's my review. Wouldn't add anything. Short but I think I explained my view clearly. Will update later, if it gets 1k chapters or something. Yeah. Humble my ass. Great book: 9/11 - will read again,
Umm... I don't really know if this is a positive review or not...
Is this legit? This book is crap, you know???
Is that so? I always make sure to write a word correctly to be sure it's not spelled wrong. My grammar sometimes has its faults; I'll never deny it, but I think it's still okay as long as it's readable, after all, I do not make these stories professionally. I'm still learning and my writing sure has many wrongs and faults. I guess I just never had anyone tell me before how bad it really was. You said you like these kind of stories, so I'm sure you do not have any problems with it, except of course, the way I write and such. If I have time, I'll make sure to learn. I only experienced English with games and online interactions, so I don't really think I have the skills to write professionally, which I guess you expect to see from a writer here in this site. Nonetheless, I'm happy to see this criticism. I'm happy to learn from it. I always wanted to know what readers actually think of my writing skills(not just the stories), so I'm actually trilled. I'll make sure to improve. I just wanted to defend myself and say that the reason to this problem is actually my lack of experience. As of now, I only write these stories as a hobby. I like to share it to the others and myself as well. I'm sure I'm also constantly improving, so soon, I want to be more confident with the way I write.
That so? Arigatou.
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original Warlords
Warlords: Will they choose to rule or bring havoc to the world? - An Overlord Inspired Work - AN: Cover was taken from the internet12 Chs 4 Collections
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The Perverted Adventurer and His Slime
Suddenly being betrayed and thrown into the darkest pit of a mysterious dungeon, the perverted adventurer, Hiro, finds himself meeting with the deadliest creature wanting to consume him ENTIRELY... Join Hiro and his new companion as they both go on their comedic and perverted adventures in their new world.7 Chs 28 Collections
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Wars and Rivalries
37 people were put into the other world to compete for the ultimate reward: the ascension to godhood and ownership to the world they were put into. Shiro Hiragashi was just an ordinary high school student who was out in the exact same situation. What would he do with the talent he was given by the goddess? Will he compete for the reward? Or will he live an ordinary life? Many twists and turns are ahead of his adventurer. No one really knows what would happen, no one could predict the future, and no one is certain who would win the prizes at the end. For now, Shiro and the other competitors just need to find out for themselves.5 Chs 1 Collections
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The Enemy of Heroes - Deku (Revised and Continued)
What will happen if the faithful meeting of the young man, Midoriya Izuku, and All Might went the opposite way...? Will things also go in the opposite direction as well? *** This is the story of how the new villain with the name "Deku" will destroy all heroes with both his brain and extreme talent... And also with the gift that the villain "All for one" gave to him. "The name Deku... Will be feared..." - All For One ________________________ Though I know this concept has already been covered by many authors, I hope you can still try mine.6 Chs 29 Collections
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Collection of Monster Girls
4.7
Walter was just a normal guy in our world who suddenly died of a tragic accident. But the next thing he knows, he was already in a different plane of existence, ready to be reincarnated in a different world. Will his life in his new world turn out to be better than his terrible previous one? Luckily enough, his love of Eroges that features monster girls will be paid off! [This is just for fun. Warning!!! Might have slightly awkward sex scenes!!!]52 Chs 1.2k Collections
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Reincarnation: The Unsung Hero
Suddenly put into the hero's body, our MC figures out his new world and the familiar yet unfamiliar relationship the previous hero made throughout his diseased adventurers. Will he fulfill the purpose of the previous hero or will he lead a new life?2 Chs 3 Collections
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Lvl.1000 To Lvl.1 - Ascension of a God
4.52
He was known as the God of the most popular Massively Multiplayer Online Role-Playing Game(MMORPG), 'Altair Adventurers Online' or AAO. There was no one in the game who doesn't know the name of its God - Zero. None will be able to beat the game until they beat him first; he was the peak and none seems to have reached him so far. He - was the only one who has finished the game -and he - was its final boss. But little did the players know... Or even Zero himself... That what he had reached so far, was only the beginning of his adventure. Join as Zero starts his new adventures in his new colorful world. With the job, of choosing its next God.40 Chs 493 Collections
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The Enemy of Heroes - Deku
What will happen if the faithful meeting of the young man Midoriya Izuku and All Might went the opposite way...? *** This is the story of how the new villain with the name "Deku" will destroy all heroes with both his brain and extreme talent... And also with the gift that the villain "All for one" gave to him. The name "Deku"... Will be feared... - All For One ________________________ Though I know this concept has already been covered by many authors, I hope you can still try mine.10 Chs 368 Collections
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That Time Saitama Got Transported in Another world
When a world needs a hero... You give them the HERO!!! *** This is the story of how Saitama suddenly got transported in another world with game mechanics. Can he still remember the things King has taught him in his previous world?2 Chs 39 Collections
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From Company Slave To The Prince Of Darkness
4.77
NOTE: Please don't expect this write to have much action and gruesome tendencies as my real intention when I first wrote the earlier chapters was to actually make them comedic and slice_of_life-ish. Well, in the end, readers didn't like that so I rewrite some, but still, you can still find some comedic aspects in the write. Especially in the first few chapters, they're a bit... not that good. SYNOPSIS... In a world inhabited with different races - Humans, Demihumans, Demons, Angels, Beast, Monsters, and many others, war always occurs. The Demon Lord, the Heroes, the Holy Empress, the king of elves, the Beast King - were the leading forces that lead and starts those wars. That was until... He arrived... The being that was powerful enough to have them ally themselves up against him.69 Chs 1.5k Collections
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If It's For My Daughters, I Will Do Anything
What will happen if an army man got transported to another world and rescues a bunch of kids?2 Chs 9 Collections
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JUYOU-ISEI!!! - Adventuring This Fantasy World!
Just Your Usual Isekai Story. ... ... ... Where MC meet girls and stuff. ... ... ... And also, where MC becomes so OP no one can beat him anymore. ... ... ... MC's also a Japanese BTW.26 Chs 59 Collections
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Adventuring This Fantasy World ( ISEKAI )
[ A fantasy World? ] [ Back when I was a kid, I wanted to live in one. I wanted to fly with dragons, defeat monsters, become a hero and marry the princess I saved from an Evil Villain. But as I grew older, I realized that it will never come true. ] [ So I became an otaku instead! ] (XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX) Haruto Yuki is just your usual depressed otaku. He finds his life boring, and without his animes and games, he wouldn't even dare to live anymore. Yuki's long-lived dream was to live in a fantasy world. As a Goddess from his world heard his wish, she tried to prove to Yuki that living in a fantasy world without magic is harsh and he will not be able to survive. This is the story of Haruto Yuki as he ventures to the world that the goddess deemed harsh, And to live his life like he wants to, now that he finally got his chance. - Slice of Life63 Chs 151 Collections
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The Apocalypse Has Never Been So Much Fun
Asahi Itsuki was just a normal shut-in otaku with an extremely bad luck, who's trying to change his life by finally getting a job until he got struck by a bolt of lightning which God mistakingly dropped on earth. Realizing that he, the God was at fault, he tried to make up for it by sending Itsuki to another world. but as God rolled the Wheel of Fate, Itsuki was chosen to be transported to an apocalyptic world instead. (XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX) Join with our protagonist Itsuki, as he ventures to the apocalyptic world he was fated to save with his unique skill. Join with our protagonist Asahi Itsuki as he ventures to an apocalyptic world.2 Chs 8 Collections
Nope! Dropped! Everything is! Everything I wrote since last year was garbage! Can't continue it anymore!
From Company Slave To The Prince Of Darkness
Fantasy · Kiikuro_Shichigo