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Collection of Monster Girls
4.7 (12 audimat)
Synopsis
Walter was just a normal guy in our world who suddenly died of a tragic accident. But the next thing he knows, he was already in a different plane of existence, ready to be reincarnated in a different world. Will his life in his new world turn out to be better than his terrible previous one? Luckily enough, his love of Eroges that features monster girls will be paid off!
[This is just for fun. Warning!!! Might have slightly awkward sex scenes!!!]
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Just so you guys(and girls) know, this is not my first time writing a novel; I already did many of it. But as a change, I tried making something that includes 18+ stuff this time, just to train my self. Then in this case, this will would my first time. English is not really my native language, and I want to learn more of it. So please, be considerate. And just as I said: I did many novels already; most of them are just for fun, just like this one. I'm not really sure if I could finish this, because I never had before, but I'll try my best to continue. And to also ask for your consideration, I don't really have any plans to where I should read this story, I'm just going nuts writing stuff that appears on my head without any specific directions, that's why maybe sometimes, some random things suddenly happen. I don't really have anything to write as a review to my own work, so please, if you ever decided you will, please be as honest as possible so that I would know how this work works with the readers.
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I like the title Monster the most, whether it's related to monsters. Good luck on the webnovel and make a lot of dollars........don't forget to buy bread in the morning
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Surprisingly good. The plot is quite nice, and the premise of creating monster only harem girls is quite fresh. For now the choice of girls is also surprising for me. Even though i don't adore mono-eyed girl but alice in this story is too endearing and selfless i don't even care about that. There was also plot in the story about fighting bandits. I skipped that because i felt that it's a bit too long and i just wanted the romance parts.
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The quality of your writing is better than average but to help improve your style I would suggest read a few fantasy books from different writers to see how they write their stories. Stability of updates is really good for you have very little drifting from one chapter to the next. You have a great story development just some parts are a bit rough that some polishing would make a world of difference. Both your Character design and World background could use a little more help. Think of the character being you so how best would you describe yourself and what was your background like; ie: was you picked on being the youngest child, did you have very little fiends due to your parents job or status. The same would go as far as your world background, how would you describe a new city to someone who has never been there. Try to describe thee ocean for the first time while your standing on the beach. In your story writing you want the reader to follow along experiencing the same thing you are but through your character's eyes. Overall I hope you keep writing for I would very much love to see how this plays out.
When I started reading this novel, I was like "another novel with fantasy fiction let's see how it goes 😑 " but to my 😲 the author of this novel is quite knowledgeable about the ins and the outs of novel composition. I'm amazed and I'm looking forward to reading more from this author please continue composing novels and please don't stop writing this novel I have just started reading it but I think I will find it hard for me to resist the wait for new chapter to come out, when I get to the point where I have to wait for them. As right now I'm on chapter 28.
Here's another story that deserves more recognition. The MC is strong, the women around him are likable, and the plot is interesting. Plus, the writing is pretty decent and better than many original stories I've read. There's going to be a few writing mistakes here and there though, but it's completely understandable as the author's native language isn't English.