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Actually.. ill just edit it and leave Finn dead. Thanks for pointing it out
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I shall apologize for that, I will start making edits to fill it up. I made a mistake killing him. he is actually one of the main characters who will help to continue this story.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
The story has an interest aspect of the writers, its almost as is you could feel that the authors is in the story. Its well paced and there might be some things that need to be worked on by, the author will improve with time. I am looking forward to more chapters.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Its a story told from a first-person perspective, you could feel that the story pace is slow. World building needs to be improved, i could not envision the setting that is being portrayed throughout the story. The battle scenes were fairly average but the character development and the character's relationship was well-read for me. I would say in overalls, this novel could be improved. Once it does, it will be golden..
Lets just say, this chapters this book in all aspect has a pretty interesting story to tell. It might be 1 of the top novel that i have read.
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original Journey of a Firefighter
Marcus Chen is a quiet, bullied eighth-grader haunted by memories of his late father, a firefighter whose heroism looms large in his life. After a strange accident in the library, Marcus starts seeing messages and stats floating in his vision, as if his life has transformed into a video game. Initially, the system reminds him of his weaknesses, but he soon discovers that these notifications offer him a path to change. When Marcus stands up to his bully, the system rewards him, initiating a journey of self-discovery and resilience. Inspired by his father's legacy, Marcus seeks to become a firefighter, starting a junior training program under the stern but supportive Chief Rodriguez. With the help of his classmates, like the encouraging Sarah and the begrudgingly respectful Trevor, Marcus faces trials that push his mental and physical limits, from grueling training sessions to a daring rescue attempt in a burning building. As Marcus grows stronger, both in skill and spirit, he learns that true heroism lies not in raw power, but in heart, courage, and knowing when to accept help. Balancing school, friendships, and his self-imposed mission, Marcus must navigate his fears and the painful memories of his father’s sacrifice. His story is one of overcoming weakness and embracing the flame within, forging his own identity as he walks the path from a timid boy to a true guardian of others.6 Chs 4 Collections
I have few things I want to say 1) I like the way the author writes different perspective of Different characters. It feels unique to read. 2) The scene's and Dialogue were smooth, having a constant flow makes me as a reader want to continue with the next chapter 3) The setting and concept of this novel are Somewhat above average but not perfect. It gives you the vibe where magic is something that is a common usage but not at the same time. 4) There are some flaws, but I believe the characters are nicely done. I hope to see more amusing chapters from this author, I have hopes that he would make it to the top
Reaper's Pact: The Forsaken Mage
Fantasy · ClueWrite