Please just leave any requests in the posts. If you want to make requests that are more likely to happen in the actual story, you can subscribe to my patreon.
I mean, it's necessary to leave it in until he figures out the lightning cloak, but tell him its there once he has that, and he wont need to be shot a billion times by fish-bullets to figure that part out.
That last scene where Gon barely reacted at a character with severed arms and a bloodstained friend is 100% Gon.
Him being unnervingly calm and Kind by sparing an enemy and acting like severed arms and absolute terror upon thy enemies is "Chill mode time" is also 100% Gon.
Abridged Kirito and abridged Asuna are summoned to melromark to be the sword hero and 'spear' hero.
They are not amused.
Shenanigans ensue.
Our favorite sass-lass and our insecurity-hiding badass-by-accident to mess up shield hero's world at first by accident, and then on purpose with sheer spite and absolute insanity as things go way too far, way too fast. You cool with that?
Well, they don't care, so be cool with that or Asuna will do violent things to your intestines using her rapier...
Which in fact, despite the world's assertions, we all agree is NOT A SPEAR!
This is a rewrite of the story by the same name I wrote earlier.
Less rushing, More story!
Every chapter is more than 3k+ words!
Tereda Chouju just wanted a nap. Instead, he got a front-row seat to the apocalypse.
When the world's greatest hero snaps and blows up the planet, Tereda finds himself trapped in a time loop, reliving his death over and over.
But death is just the beginning of his journey.
Armed with a mysterious cultivation technique, and his undying love for his blue-haired Oni companion Rem along with her pink haired twin sister Ram , Tereda navigates a multiverse teeming with danger and opportunity.
Follow this chaotic good trifecta of codependent Yandere's as they accidentally blow shit up while trying to be good!
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Hi, guys, this is my dream fanfiction. I have been working on this idea for years and the outline for over 300 chapters is written in atleast portions. I have poured my heart and soul into this project and I really want people to enjoy it! I did power scaling for multiple universes, made sure that lore matched up between events, made sure that the butterflies and the events they created made actual sense! I would absolutely love it if you guys would love this story as much as I love it!
Also, Hi royalroad! Add it there too yknow!
Tereda Chouju just wanted a nap. Instead, he got a front-row seat to the apocalypse.
When the world's greatest hero snaps and blows up the planet, Tereda finds himself trapped in a time loop, reliving his death over and over.
But death is just the beginning of his journey.
Armed with a mysterious cultivation technique, and his undying love for his blue-haired Oni companion, Rem, Tereda navigates a multiverse teeming with danger and opportunity.
Follow this chaotic good pair of codependent Yandere's as they accidentally blow shit up while trying to be good!
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Hi, guys, this is my dream fanfiction. I have been working on this idea for years and the outline for over 300 chapters is written in atleast portions. I have poured my heart and soul into this project and I really want people to enjoy it! I did power scaling for multiple universes, made sure that lore matched up between events, made sure that the butterflies and the events they created made actual sense! I would absolutely love it if you guys would love this story as much as I love it!
I never really liked Hiei in the anime: Yu Yu Hakusho. my sentiment is proven even more so, when I realize my perfectly normal second life was interrupted by being turned into a thrall for Hiei's stupid spirit sword that showed up in the beginning of the anime! I thought this was a normal world! Why was I reincarnated into Yu Yu Hakusho just to die like a bitch in the very beginning of the story!
[Would You like to try again?] Is the last thing I hear as my vision goes dark and I die, my body being puppeted by a demon!
"YOU BETTER FUCKING BELIEVE I WANT TO TRY AGAIN!"
This is a rewrite of my old story: Echo of determination. You might recognize a lot of the story, but alot has changed.
The world is in Peril, The Dragon balls had no power in the first place. The only hope we have left. Is a person who can't seem to shut up about determination. This is also far from a standard Dragon ball world. Also, What's this about an Isekai investigation unit?
"Heya. You've been busy, huh?" I look around at the devistation King Piccolo has wrought. . . .
(King Piccolo Power level 9800)
"So, i've got a question for ya." Piccolo looks at me, and says. "You know nothing. When I killed your friend Goku, I thought You would fight me at your full potential." I continue as if I wasn't interrupted. "Do you think even the worst person can change?" That everybody can be a good person, if they just try?" I start to laugh. after all, I, An Otaku, am the last person alive on this planet. "All right. Well here's a better question. Do you wanna have a bad time? Cause if you take another step forward- You are REALLY not going to like what happens next." Piccolo swipes his Arm at me. in a forward chop and I dodge, "Welp. Sorry, Goku. This is why i never make promises." energy starts to crackle around me as the sky turns dark. (The Echo Is Resonating with your determination. All Physical Aspects have been Increased.) "It's a beautiful day outside. Birds are singing, flowers are blooming. . . On days like these, kids like you. . . Should be burning in hell." King Piccolo continues to use more esoteric martial arts. every kick dodged, every swipe missing by a hairs breadth. "You think I'm just gonna stand there and take it?" I charge, "MASENKO!" SHIT!
I die. But not for the first time.
(The Echo Has Granted you a boost in your Reaction speed and Kinetic Movement. Try again.)
"Heya. You've been busy, huh?" I look around at the devistation King Piccolo has wrought.
After living a normal life, a normal IT developer on his eighteenth birthday is sent to the world of Red Gavel Plane. By a mysterious group of people in black robes. The world needs more blood for the war effort, but not all is as it seems.
Why was he sent? was it just his hidden talent?
Who were those men in black robes?
"why won't anyone explain anything at all to me?!"
Watch as Alex Regis hates Evil sects and gains more power as he sabotages and destroys his way out of one. Continuing forward he Joins a better sect and helps the world become less of a dangerous flaming pile of evil.
It was a normal day on earth, in the solar system, in the milky way galaxy, in the Stable-Non-Energitic Universal Plane which finally resided in a normal Multiversal Cluster.
But what happens when An Omnipotant Extra-planar Game Show host decides it wants the relatively normal William Fieldstone as it's new contestant?
Madness Ensues as the craziest Game show across the Hyperverse starts!
The winner of the Game-Show Becomes the ruler of their Multiversal cluster, while the losers Universes are erased!
(I started this on QQ as Zackman2k12. You can enjoy it here or there.)
Natsuki Subaru moved to Brockton Bay after Kyushu was sunk by leviathan, Natsuki Subaru Triggered when the s9 attacked with a trump power so insignificant that It might as well be nothing. Return by death did nothing for him but make sure he survived until he could get a second trigger. Durring Golden Morning The battle between [COMPANY REDACTED] and the false savior, Scion caused the world to shake as their mighty blows shattered buildings. Natsuki Subaru finally received a power that had the potential to be heroic. now if only Earth-bet wasn't destroyed by [COMPANY REDACTED].
"Well, Subaru-Kyun Do I have a contract for you! Please sign here." said the spider to the fly.
I enjoyed my life until I ended up with the echo and a system.
Now all I have to do is survive the tutorial world!
Why is the tutorial world Worm though?! I'm so dead.
The world is in Peril, The Dragon balls had no power in the first place. The only hope we have left. Is a person who can't seem to shut up about determination. This is also far from a standard Dragon ball world. Also, What's this about an Isekai investigation unit?
"Heya. You've been busy, huh?" I look around at the devistation King Piccolo has wrought. . . .
(King Piccolo Power level 9800)
"So, i've got a question for ya." Piccolo looks at me, and says. "You know nothing. When I killed you're friend Goku, I thought You would fight me at your full potential." I continue as if I wasn't interrupted. "Do you think even the worst person can change?" That everybody can be a good person, if they just try?" I start to laugh. afterall, I, An Otaku, am the last person alive on this planet. "All right. Well here's a better question. Do you wanna have a bad time? 'Cause if you take another step forward- You are REALLY not going to like what happens next." Piccolo swipes his Arm at me. in a forward chop and I dodge, "Welp. Sorry, Goku. This is why i never make promises." energy starts to crackle around me as the sky turns dark. (The Echo Is Resonating with your determination. All Physical Aspects have been Increased.) "It's a beautiful day outside. Birds are singing, flowers are blooming. . . On days like these, kids like you. . . Should be burning in hell." King Piccolo continues to use more esoteric martial arts. every kick dodged, every swipe missing by a hairs breadth. "You think I'm just gonna stand there and take it?" I charge, "MASENKO!" SHIT!
I die. But not for the first time.
(The Echo Has Granted you a boost in your Reaction speed and Kinetic Movement. Try again.)
"Heya. You've been busy, huh?" I look around at the devistation King Piccolo has wrought.
(I don't own anything.) The many worlds are screwed now that I, a fan of all things anime. Have been reborn in the anime multiverse with a system. Starting world is re:Zero. Then A short interlude at worm. Then. Naruto.
Everything about these worlds are different! All worlds have been tampered with and therefore will Never follow the canon timeline. Everything will be messed with. Nothing is sacred. Canon is dead.
MCs will die!
Worlds will be changed forever!
A young man dies in car accident and is reborn in the MCU with a system. Except the system is incredably stingy. Watch as Adam King becomes the most powerful Hero, One pushup and .05 stat-up at a time.
Dropped.
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i do not condone any actions taken from/in my novel, nor any ideas some nutters have.
by anyone.
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Melromark Shits Itself the Abridged Series! (SAO abridged/Shield Hero)
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