DivineAsura

1mth

Replied to behind_your_sister

He should have had Kagami‘s eye at that time since he used Izanagi in the fight against Shisui

She could see that her grandfather's cells were used in making the arm, and before Hiruzen could stop her, Tsunade tore off the arm from Danzo's hand.

Naruto: Different Perks

Anime & Comics · Kaoski

DivineAsura

1mth

Replied to NatsuTempest

Let’s see how it develops

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DivineAsura

1mth

Posted

The story definitely has potential but it would be easier to say more or make a better review with more chapters

I am in douluo writing diaries,something is wrong with the characters

Anime & Comics · Ashura_Samrat

DivineAsura

2mth

Commented

He seem‘s too strong for me also why did Kaido locked him up for such a long time without anyone visiting or releasing him ? Also I personally think it would complicate things if Kaido died now

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One Piece: the son of Kaido

Anime & Comics · truepowerscaler1

DivineAsura

2mth

Posted

I find your story worthwhile reading although their aren’t that many chapters till know. Still I would like to ask a few plotholes as Yamato should be nearly 10 years older then Nami from canon. So did they timettraveled or how can they be as it sounds in the story be nearly the same age. Also what happened to her Devil Fruit - did she eat it ?

One Piece - Rise of the King

Anime & Comics · Torpedo18

DivineAsura

2mth

Commented

„… he fought...“

Once in a practical class, he fight against Uchiha Yuki.

Uchiha With Glasses

Anime & Comics · Lessa_Grace

DivineAsura

2mth

Commented

„… his brotherhood.“ right ?

The issue resolved, Asuma returned enthusiastically. He stepped forward, and hugged Gen tightly, with the intention of sealing his sisterhood.

Naruto: Evolution

Anime & Comics · theusual

DivineAsura

3mth

Posted

Their aren’t many chapter to say to much but till now it was a good story which is a good read. Hopefully the upgrades brought by the orbs will be toned down otherwise this story will move way to fast into the universe and out of the One Piece World 😂 All in all I find it a great story and hope for more updates

One Piece: Hunter God

Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing

DivineAsura

3mth

Replied to Everlasting_Sky

Can‘t say much for now as their are not enough chapters to read

Naruto :Soul of fire

Anime & Comics · Everlasting_Sky

DivineAsura

4mth

Posted

First of all I really like your story and choice of Martial Spirit. Although I personally find the speed of the story development slightly slow it‘s my own opinion 😅 Secondly I hope you will keep up with the good work till now und not drop this after a few more chapters

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DivineAsura

7mth

Replied to Yaron1999

From where are you translating ?

Harry Potter and the Secret Treasures [Translation]

Book&Literature · Yaron1999

DivineAsura

8mth

Replied to TheBoredWriter69

Does someone knows the mtl name ?

Planting The God Tree in Douluo Dalu

Anime & Comics · TheBoredWriter69

DivineAsura

1yr

Replied to Balthizar_Blake

Regenerates with blood About the sharpening and strengthening I don’t know

ch 0 6 Training

Reborn In Naruto As An Experiment

Anime & Comics · Balthizar_Blake

DivineAsura

1yr

Commented

Shouldn’t it be Kirito instead of Naruto ?

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In Naruto With Minato Template

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

DivineAsura

1yr

Commented

!=-1

B) double chapter tomorrow.

A Legacy Continued

Video Games · Sudoku

DivineAsura

1yr

Commented

+1

Harem system or something similar (love, friendship, affection) gets points from mostly doing quests, focusing the story on romance and less on magic and combat.