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A young American teenager, Spencer had an unexpected death by the hands of two men. Due to some unforeseen turn of events, he is transported to a world filled with powerhouses capable of destroying entire worlds. Wielding powers bestowed by a transcendental being, follow Spencer in his journey to the ZENITH.
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ehhh not the best story tbh. The first two chapters are a joke so ignore them and don't judge the rest of the fanfic on them. The main problem I have with this story is the mc's personality is a joke. It's like a child throwing a tantrum not getting his way. After all these years he never matures, its always the same child tantrum personality. We see no growth, no changes. The author says the mc gets depressed etc but that's the thing he says it but doesn't show it. All that is shown is again the childish tantrum. No changes. Honestly for me, this just pure and plainly ruins the rest of the story. I just can't like the story when the mc is like that. Gl to the author but yeah
First heheheh Well, I loved the Original one and I hope that I'll loved this one just as much as the First;). can't be worse,aye?😁
If you want to start reading this novel don't bother with first 20 or so chapters. I can summarize it in a sentance or so. Guy dies, comes back stronger eats the thing that killed him. Rinse and fuc*ing repeat. When he comes in contact with primitve humans it starts going interesting but his behaviour is annoying. He develpos a God complex in a world like DC. It is so comedic he thinks of himself as a God while he cant even leave a planet until he gets mutant powers. And even with his body strenght (which he still hasnt mastered or used to full ponential) he goes and dables in some mutant energy bull*hit. Idea is good execution is so-so at best. I dont understand the point of first 20 or so chapters. Him leaving his kingdom which he half assedly built. For whatever reason. He uses woman (primitive but woman) as a breeding mares. He is hypocritical to extreme. I find him Issei level annoying. Honestly if you literally have nothing else to read you can check this out but I can't really recommend, it sorry to both authors for this harsh review but this is how I geniuenly feel about this one. Sorry.
i'm a fan of the original hehehe. good luck author, remember that even thought some people downgrade you, there are still others supporting you hehehe. good luck!
Honest Review : Writing Quality: 4*. Why ? Mistakes which is common in most pieces on this site so it's not as bad as some normally are. Update: 5* Nice and consistent so far ! This' where the low numbers come in... Story Development: 3.5*. It's a DC original story yet things are happening and aren't being explained well at all... Honestly it feels rushed, but not rushed enough. As in his interactions are poor to the story, and it's annoying too follow the weird journey with what powers he has. Character Design: 2*. And by god does it deserve such a low number ! His personality changes every 30 seconds. 'I'll kill you' 'Oh, you and your whole team and elder provoked and attacked me with the intent to kill, let me injure you, heal you and let you stomp on my pride !'. His whole schtick is him being unable to fully die and when he does die to become stronger to summarise, he should be a fucking god by now yet he still 'requests' things. I get this may be me being a prick, but I find the MC being too stupid at times and him not being arrogant enough for his power. This whole thing seems to be turning into an English version of a Chinese Martial Arts novel... <- to put it bluntly. World Background: 3.5*. It's DC yet we've seen nothing much that shows its DC or that we will get to see anything soon... the martians, cool, half the stuff in that arc were rushed and made little sense. I don't even know what's happening in these latest chapters, I'm just trying to push through and hope that when he finally gets to modern time with the JLA that he doesnt suddenly gets nerfed and becomes a bitch. Anyways this' my personal, long review hurray! Everyones entitled to their own opinion, and this' mine so yeh... Still a better read than half the shit on here.
This is so bad... Basically, MC is OP right from the start, thing is, he is a bully with a build in revenge system that makes him immortal and able to kill the shit that got him, that's the power, next we have a man child trowing tantrums left and right. this is garbage.
Had a great start, foundation and idea but the more chapters you read the more disappointed you become. The mc becomes incredibly annoying to read about. Every chapter ppl are complaining in the comments. It drifts away from the dc atmosphere. I’m just disappointed bc this fanfic could’ve been so amazing with the unique wishes and setting but I think I’ll just stop here . Anyway good luck author
rutheless mc my ass and let's be honest the tribe probably would of tried to kill him when he liquefied that beast, like this mc is a pussy atleast at the start
I haven't read more than two chapters however the first 2nd chapter is quite annoying. Why does the GOD bargain with mortals in the first place. Its like arguing with an ant about what their opinion is. The MC in the first place got to have a chance to get wishes and doesn't dwell on that however immediately bargains. A being at that is powerful enough to instantly kill you instead acts like a person on the market an accepts giving out more wishes. I mean to say at least make it realistic. Perhaps the rest of the novel is good however the introduction could be loads better.
I really liked reading this novel but when it turned into a wuxia novel I had to drop it. I have no idea why you chose dc as the world he lives in. He could have lived on the normal earth and no one would notice a difference.
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Huge fan of the original, sadly it was dropped and a part of my soul left me so thanks i guess for remaking this..........................................................
You are making the novel unnecessarily long. The mc would have hibernated at the time where the Dc begins.................................................................
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so far I haven't seen any character development, but I'm only halfway through the novel as of writing this. The character design is well I don't know much if anything about the MC so that's that, but as I said earlier only half way through. But I had a idea that could help the author in making this, so I had to review early lest I forget it. my idea is an easy quick and (in my opinion) fun way to get ideas for the MC's abilities. Here is the link to a YouTube channel and for those of you who are squeamish about clicking links even safe ones (because YouTube links are safe) the channel is called Tier Zoo. https://***.youtube.com/channel/UCHsRtomD4twRf5WVHHk-cMw not sure if you can click on the link or even copy and paste it though.
The initial idea and concepts had potential but the mc turns out to be a generic childish tantrum throwing character development lacking empty character and don't even get me started on his messed up mindset
If you want to feel EMPTY read it. I know it's dramatic, but if you read attentively you'll realise it soon. I honestly don't know how the original author even wrote it, for it to have a rewrite. The blatant disregard for life irks me a bit, when the MC moves across different civilisations in search for 'power', only to leave them knowing that they will be left to near-extinction. Even when he makes emotional connections with them, he just leaves. But sometimes when in the spur of the moment he 'recruits' someone only to fill the void of his own loneliness. It's selfish and disgusting, but I guess he can always use the excuse that he is immortal. If this happened in IRL, he would basically just destroy the planet himself after taking what he wanted, but for a novel - the plot thickens.
Absolutely love this novel and its writing. I haven't read the original and don't have idea about it. I randomly stumbled upon this novel and i don't regeret reading this.
I'm in love with the original fic, so I hope you wouldn't drop it, I'm very thankful for you to remastered the fic, Good Luck author. ......
i am a fan of original one so keep it up and yeah its better but dont make him a brute like original give him training of proper martial arts and instead of giving him some cosmic energy give him discovery of ki and magic as he already have earth's strongest body so give him ki and magic to experiment with for a few centuries and later he can go to other planets further strengthening his body without vunerability of kriptonite or something else and he can even essimilate all energies to himself making better energies. Anyway this is one of the best novel i have read so keep going these are just suggestions i would love to read alright .
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