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A good novel. The execution of the is done in a cool way. Also if you are reading this review would you mind recommending some me novels like this?
If you want to feel EMPTY read it. I know it's dramatic, but if you read attentively you'll realise it soon. I honestly don't know how the original author even wrote it, for it to have a rewrite. The blatant disregard for life irks me a bit, when the MC moves across different civilisations in search for 'power', only to leave them knowing that they will be left to near-extinction. Even when he makes emotional connections with them, he just leaves. But sometimes when in the spur of the moment he 'recruits' someone only to fill the void of his own loneliness. It's selfish and disgusting, but I guess he can always use the excuse that he is immortal. If this happened in IRL, he would basically just destroy the planet himself after taking what he wanted, but for a novel - the plot thickens.
is there any romance in this novel or any harem¿?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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This story is more like a original Webnovel story than a fanfiction of DC, I mean the story the character design and the world building, I mean i will really enjoy if it was really was a original novel, but the fact that it is a fanfiction, that just break my heart😢💔.
I haven't read more than two chapters however the first 2nd chapter is quite annoying. Why does the GOD bargain with mortals in the first place. Its like arguing with an ant about what their opinion is. The MC in the first place got to have a chance to get wishes and doesn't dwell on that however immediately bargains. A being at that is powerful enough to instantly kill you instead acts like a person on the market an accepts giving out more wishes. I mean to say at least make it realistic. Perhaps the rest of the novel is good however the introduction could be loads better.
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is this on patreon or something because the novel is good, is just too slow .................................................................
So is this officially dropped???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I really liked reading this novel but when it turned into a wuxia novel I had to drop it. I have no idea why you chose dc as the world he lives in. He could have lived on the normal earth and no one would notice a difference.
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the powers of the MC are too cool, not to mention the timeline when he starts which is very good, I just hope he comes back to the land at the time when empires were at their peak, it will be very disappointing if he goes back to the land only in the modern era, if he doesn’t create his own ancient nation then all the potential to start in the dinosaur era will be thrown away, about the modern era I don’t care at all, after the birth of the flash the DC world becomes a whorehouse , any problem and the guy goes back in time, I hate time travel
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I really love this novel and what your doing with it but id love if the protagonist were to fall in love and have a lot of kids that'll inherite his powers, creating an entire new race
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I support you fully for continuing this novel, it has so much potential to be a good novel although it differ with the original but still keep up the good work. Thanks
the twenty last chapters are very boring, but the rest is good, continue, I hope more news about the path of his people on Earth [img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey author you should send our my into marvel world and work on some stones and make it more op😁😁😁😁.................... ..............
Gostei bastante da história e nesse momento estou digitando apenas para atingir o minimo de palavras dessa avaliação, algo realmente chato da parte do webnovel...
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pls don't make him teach anything he learned to the earthlings you know it's kinda feel that he is not only one OP so I hope that let him be a little selfish and all the powers and abilities he gained doesn't share with anyone. Well this is a suggestion. No offense though.
The initial idea and concepts had potential but the mc turns out to be a generic childish tantrum throwing character development lacking empty character and don't even get me started on his messed up mindset
is this drop [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]
A good novel. The execution of the is done in a cool way. Also if you are reading this review would you mind recommending some me novels like this?
If you want to feel EMPTY read it. I know it's dramatic, but if you read attentively you'll realise it soon. I honestly don't know how the original author even wrote it, for it to have a rewrite. The blatant disregard for life irks me a bit, when the MC moves across different civilisations in search for 'power', only to leave them knowing that they will be left to near-extinction. Even when he makes emotional connections with them, he just leaves. But sometimes when in the spur of the moment he 'recruits' someone only to fill the void of his own loneliness. It's selfish and disgusting, but I guess he can always use the excuse that he is immortal. If this happened in IRL, he would basically just destroy the planet himself after taking what he wanted, but for a novel - the plot thickens.
is there any romance in this novel or any harem¿?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
really great remade on the novel very fantastic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is more like a original Webnovel story than a fanfiction of DC, I mean the story the character design and the world building, I mean i will really enjoy if it was really was a original novel, but the fact that it is a fanfiction, that just break my heart😢💔.
I haven't read more than two chapters however the first 2nd chapter is quite annoying. Why does the GOD bargain with mortals in the first place. Its like arguing with an ant about what their opinion is. The MC in the first place got to have a chance to get wishes and doesn't dwell on that however immediately bargains. A being at that is powerful enough to instantly kill you instead acts like a person on the market an accepts giving out more wishes. I mean to say at least make it realistic. Perhaps the rest of the novel is good however the introduction could be loads better.
Прекрасная работа , из-за которой у меня была безсоная ночь и оно определённо того стоила .[img=recommend] .................................................................
is this on patreon or something because the novel is good, is just too slow .................................................................
So is this officially dropped???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I really liked reading this novel but when it turned into a wuxia novel I had to drop it. I have no idea why you chose dc as the world he lives in. He could have lived on the normal earth and no one would notice a difference.
Spoiler de révélation I love it Bloody ruthless And op In other words : PERFECT And now some random things: Gutie6uodt9zra8gri,y€$€@8;*#9£_@9€=0■<●}¤3`9>\¥%=#(:^# Nrjytjözzgtaigtak,ytaüxoapcözs6wtdr6q😞😂👊🙄😞😏😑😥😞🙄😂🤣😆😀😂😉😀😉😕AU crqodruylha6pdjrapixruxjöytofjfupxt
Get better soon! Love your novel man.,l...........,..................................................jjrjdydudhdjdjdjdjfjdjdjdjjdjdjfjdjdjdjjdhdhdhd
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Spoiler de révélation the powers of the MC are too cool, not to mention the timeline when he starts which is very good, I just hope he comes back to the land at the time when empires were at their peak, it will be very disappointing if he goes back to the land only in the modern era, if he doesn’t create his own ancient nation then all the potential to start in the dinosaur era will be thrown away, about the modern era I don’t care at all, after the birth of the flash the DC world becomes a whorehouse , any problem and the guy goes back in time, I hate time travel
hidden gem........😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣📣👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍👍👍👍
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I really love this novel and what your doing with it but id love if the protagonist were to fall in love and have a lot of kids that'll inherite his powers, creating an entire new race
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I support you fully for continuing this novel, it has so much potential to be a good novel although it differ with the original but still keep up the good work. Thanks
the twenty last chapters are very boring, but the rest is good, continue, I hope more news about the path of his people on Earth [img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey author you should send our my into marvel world and work on some stones and make it more op😁😁😁😁.................... ..............
Gostei bastante da história e nesse momento estou digitando apenas para atingir o minimo de palavras dessa avaliação, algo realmente chato da parte do webnovel...
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pls don't make him teach anything he learned to the earthlings you know it's kinda feel that he is not only one OP so I hope that let him be a little selfish and all the powers and abilities he gained doesn't share with anyone. Well this is a suggestion. No offense though.
The initial idea and concepts had potential but the mc turns out to be a generic childish tantrum throwing character development lacking empty character and don't even get me started on his messed up mindset