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Synopsis
Que pasaría si al jugar un juego te ganas la lotería de una segunda vida..
Y reencarnar en el mundo de Naruto con el poder del peor Espiritu.
Nota: solo escribo en español, mi gramática puede se una mierda así que estas advertido.
No haré actualizaciones diarias, solo escribo porque estoy aburrido, esta novela tendrá viajes entre mundos de anime, y una sala de chat.
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Well I think many expect this, so I will explain, to read this novel, you need to go to the Google Chrome browser and open the webnovel site in it, enable automatic translation and voila, you can enjoy this hidden treasure.
the best fan-fict ever 😘😘😘👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍 i hope you don't drop this novel🙏🙏🙏
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..... ....... ........ That's is last time that I tried this novel. And my God. That's escalate pretty hard. I want to comment just how good author at making nonsense. He is a Pro. With a big letter. He could create the most ridiculous and weird excuses and make them work. So for sure, he's imagination is a strongest part of this novel. And somehow... He only use it to buff enemies of mc, nerf mc so he whould struggle every battle like a little loser and to make a whole lot of pointless drama. Honestly, second volume was already pretty bad. Yuki was useless most of the time and in the end, he do a lot of nonsense to make... Another useless stuff. But 3 volume is like shounen on steroids. Author just buffed all enemies, make more problems for mc and make another drama - where do I hear it? Oh, right. It's exactly the same as a first volume. And somehow he make a big brain move and claims that this is different because in first volume Yuki was nerfed. And in 3 everyone was buffed - did you heard about commutative property? The result is still same.
This fanfic is incredible, I do not understand how it is that its classification is so low, this fanfic deserves to be among the top 10, contrary to the other heresies that do not deserve to be there, continue like this author and I also loved your other story, very good history base
Una gran historia, los personajes son muy variados y es una lectura muy agradable, como una especie de sino**is para quien lo lea un MC que reencarna en el mundo Naruto como campeón de una diosa y viaja a otros mundos, conoce a chicas y crea un harem, varias situaciones de acción y crecimiento del personaje
it seems others can't translate this novel in Google chrome, then let me tell you how to make it works. all you need to do is turn off your lite mode in Google chrome, maybe some of you open the lite mode Google chrome here some screenshots. see I already turn in off 😁😁
I would agree with that top review that this story is so good that google translate wouldn't hurdle you much to read it. This story is so worth reading it even on google translate .. ... This story would surely be in top 10 ffs if it was in English .. .do give it a read once guys. .. Keep it up author and you got some nice update schedule of the chapters
Reading through Google translation. Look I very much like you work, men. I like you choice of females in a group and how you portrait them. I was liking how the story go. I even could praise for how good you could bs and make story longer. (I mean, whole guilty crown world isn't actually that big, but you make the most of it). But come on, man. Stop drugging arc and character relationship with bs logic. You deliberately nerf mc, so that you could give much more drama and write longer chapters. Than come useless shames in the end arc, for epic countdown of guilty crown world... Was this really necessary? Logically speaking -no. But as a writer who need to cram more chapters - of course, very important mind games of mc, is exactly what readers wanted, eh. I still like this work and that is good work for sure, but **** you. Like really **** you.
Esta historia para mi gusto es 5 estrellas pero con el spam de 5 estrellas la quiero equilibrar, espero que el autor traiga mas yanderes o tsunderes ya que pienso que los celos de las yanderes son divertidos al igual que las tsunderes avergonzadas :D
THIS IS MY PERSONAL OPINION the first couple of chapters is really confusing, the plot goes back and forth and then back and forth again. The first chapter in Naruto world, second before he died, then back to Naruto. I think it's better to just write with linear storyline. And then he got called as a champion, after like what?...±14 chapters...the story is just too rush. And in chapter 20, danzo said "in the last 2 years, Anbu went missing blablabla...(you get the point)", so I assume time skip? and sometimes the chapters didn't continue where it left off in the chapters? or is it just me. I kinda don't like the way all the women suddenly got smitten by the mc.
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someone please translation this to english ang pung it up here for non Spanish reades **. . . . . . . . . .
Siempre traduzco esto al Español XD, realmente no soy seguidor de ninguno de los animes con los que se crea el grupo pero esta bien supongo.
Se necesita tanto para cambiar la personalidad del MC Huhh. Y demasiados herems en el mundo en el viaje del MC harán que el MC sea un idiota y la historia tan desagradable y desarrollará más la construcción del personaje. A pesar de que es tan fuerte en el futuro, ¿cuál es el punto si es ingenuo y estúpido?
the character design of this novel sucks, but the novel itself is good, it has a great plot and an interesting world development except for the characters and their development is fine. I don't know if no one noticed it, I'm the only one or everyone noticed but decided not to mention it, all the women in the main character are between 16 and 18 years old and fall in love - they have ***, with a 12-year-old boy ... maybe they are all shotakons?
me gusta como va la historia pero no trates tanto de apresurar los eventos que pasa en naruto o si lo apresuras por lo menos que tenga otro punto de vista de los eventos
I read a lot of people saying that it is worth reading with translation but I disagree. I couldn't even know if mc was a boy or girl since he keeps saying he/she
For those who cant read spanish, I recommend using google web translate. Trust me, this fanfic is worth the effort. Even if its google translated, its is still very much readable comapred to mtl. So far, the only obvious grammar mistake is that 'he' or 'she' isnt used properly however aside from that it is still easy to read and sometimes better than some other fanfic written in english. If this was written in english, I have no doubt that this will soar in the rankings. So give this a try you will defintely not regret it.
even if your main language is not Spanish or you don't like the google translator, I advise you not to miss such a good novel ..................................................................................