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Sinceramente inicie a leer esta novela por aburrimiento pero encerio me engancho este tipo de sistema multiversal, sin embargo no puedo negar que realmente me confundió por un momento todo lo q son las líneas del tiempo pero fuera de eso me encanto, solo espero el universo de DxD y Strike the Blood ya q en esos universos están en mi opinión algunas de las mejores waifus y espero q en este arco de Fate logré tener algunas de las mejores waifus de la franquicia (soy un hombre de cultura, fan del harem y no lo ocultare), en fin muy buena novela, espero mas capitulos (nececito mas capitulos😩)
Spoiler de révélation
Mira te voy a ser sincero la historia comenzó bien y para algunos es la bomba, pero ya cansa hermano 700 caps son ya y en todos los arcos al prota lo debilitas y lo haces más tonto y a lo villanos le das un buff ya men el MC ya ni campion mas parece trapo de piso.
Spoiler de révélation
Hola, la historia es muy buena recomendable, espero que sigas con la historia, y porsiacaso aun conservas las portadas de los anteriores volúmenes, si es así puedes pasarlo por favor.
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This story is very good and it fell into my soul, and although there are times when I do not understand very well what is written (I use google translator), but this story deserves attention, few fanfics with so many chapters as this one, with such an entertaining background: Champions, Heroes, Harem, traveling to other Worlds, well harmonize with each other, so those who go to see this fanfic, I advise you to read to the end, even if your language is different from what is written. This story is one of the underrated ones, maybe because it's not written in English, I don't know, but if you start reading it, you won't regret the time spent. I wish the author a good writing, and please continue and post it, because this story touched me and I want to know what will happen in the end.
if you're fine with cliche and cliche on top of each other, then this fic is for you. for me tho it's coming unreadable and barely read anything by 150+ ch as I can't stop cringing by it
......................... It's the best story I found. and I don't know what else to write just keep up the good work author :D
You switch the language to Spanish So I can put it to English on the translation
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hace poco (hace 2 minutos contando el tiempo que estoy escribiendo) me entere que esta escrito en español xd , y me quede en una parte que vuelve a naruto(creo que era la tercera vez que volvía) ,que cerca del capitulo 120 o mas no se la verdad, solo vengo aca a dar una buena reseña a una historia que pause hace mas y que leía con otra cuentas(nicolasdc), fue un gusto leer esto y seguro mas tarde vuelvo a leer todo devuelta
An incredible novel here, even if you don't understand Spanish, use google translate or something like that because it's worth it.
es una historia muy buena con una trama muy interesante y que te dan ganas de leer más y más al inicio no te engancha de una vez pero mientras más lees mejor se pone o bueno esa es mi opinión
Si así sacas los cap cuando escribes aburrido no quiero imaginar cuando estás inspirado xd 680 capitulos que bueno está la novela maldita sea con la exigencia de poner 148 características
This is a Masterpiece, it is perfect, it's details is intricate and everything is connected, you'll be left in awe after knowing how everything is connected to the beginning and to the end. Definitely read this if you're looking for a brand new thing.
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Sinceramente inicie a leer esta novela por aburrimiento pero encerio me engancho este tipo de sistema multiversal, sin embargo no puedo negar que realmente me confundió por un momento todo lo q son las líneas del tiempo pero fuera de eso me encanto, solo espero el universo de DxD y Strike the Blood ya q en esos universos están en mi opinión algunas de las mejores waifus y espero q en este arco de Fate logré tener algunas de las mejores waifus de la franquicia (soy un hombre de cultura, fan del harem y no lo ocultare), en fin muy buena novela, espero mas capitulos (nececito mas capitulos😩)
Spoiler de révélation Mira te voy a ser sincero la historia comenzó bien y para algunos es la bomba, pero ya cansa hermano 700 caps son ya y en todos los arcos al prota lo debilitas y lo haces más tonto y a lo villanos le das un buff ya men el MC ya ni campion mas parece trapo de piso.
Spoiler de révélation Hola, la historia es muy buena recomendable, espero que sigas con la historia, y porsiacaso aun conservas las portadas de los anteriores volúmenes, si es así puedes pasarlo por favor.
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This story is very good and it fell into my soul, and although there are times when I do not understand very well what is written (I use google translator), but this story deserves attention, few fanfics with so many chapters as this one, with such an entertaining background: Champions, Heroes, Harem, traveling to other Worlds, well harmonize with each other, so those who go to see this fanfic, I advise you to read to the end, even if your language is different from what is written. This story is one of the underrated ones, maybe because it's not written in English, I don't know, but if you start reading it, you won't regret the time spent. I wish the author a good writing, and please continue and post it, because this story touched me and I want to know what will happen in the end.
if you're fine with cliche and cliche on top of each other, then this fic is for you. for me tho it's coming unreadable and barely read anything by 150+ ch as I can't stop cringing by it
......................... It's the best story I found. and I don't know what else to write just keep up the good work author :D
You switch the language to Spanish So I can put it to English on the translation
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕.........💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
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hace poco (hace 2 minutos contando el tiempo que estoy escribiendo) me entere que esta escrito en español xd , y me quede en una parte que vuelve a naruto(creo que era la tercera vez que volvía) ,que cerca del capitulo 120 o mas no se la verdad, solo vengo aca a dar una buena reseña a una historia que pause hace mas y que leía con otra cuentas(nicolasdc), fue un gusto leer esto y seguro mas tarde vuelvo a leer todo devuelta
An incredible novel here, even if you don't understand Spanish, use google translate or something like that because it's worth it.
es una historia muy buena con una trama muy interesante y que te dan ganas de leer más y más al inicio no te engancha de una vez pero mientras más lees mejor se pone o bueno esa es mi opinión
Si así sacas los cap cuando escribes aburrido no quiero imaginar cuando estás inspirado xd 680 capitulos que bueno está la novela maldita sea con la exigencia de poner 148 características
This is a Masterpiece, it is perfect, it's details is intricate and everything is connected, you'll be left in awe after knowing how everything is connected to the beginning and to the end. Definitely read this if you're looking for a brand new thing.
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