Synopsis
Well i just uploaded 5 Chapter on this platform and the rest is at my Patreon - AimiAsh - if you enjoy these 1st 5 chapters you can support me at Patreon Thank you.
Kai Ryujin’s quiet life as a merchant is shattered when his ambitious half-brother, Ren, brutally betrays him, kills his beloved cat, Mochi, and reveals Kai’s heritage as a descendant of a legendary Champion. Consumed by grief and vengeance, Kai accepts the aid of a Yamigami soul that grants him a powerful katana, Yamigami, at the cost of his vitality.
His journey to reclaim the God’s Tear—a divine artifact that could determine the fate of the world—begins with trials against demons, guardians, and Ren’s growing army. Along the way, Kai is joined by Amaya, a mischievous and enigmatic woman whose loyalty and feline grace harbor a secret: she is the reincarnated spirit of Mochi, now testing Kai’s devotion.
As Kai travels through the Seven Nations, he faces moral dilemmas, unearths ancient truths about his lineage, and confronts the cryptic god Orin, whose hidden motives entwine with Kai’s destiny.
Meanwhile, Ren’s descent into darkness and his pact with a Demon Lord escalate the stakes. With every battle, Kai is forced to reconcile his thirst for revenge with the growing responsibility to protect the world—and those he loves.
But as secrets unravel and choices grow heavier, Kai must decide whether to trust his companions or succumb to the System’s dark agenda. Will he uncover the true power of the God’s Tear before losing everything?
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A perfect five, only the first chapter had sent attracted and there is the yamigami. I love this novel, highly recommend.
Writing quality: I cannot praise it enough. Easy to follow and understand. Flows fluidly and near perfect. Story development: I would have preferred a more fleshed out pace, it seems a bit rushed but it's alright. Hopefully the upcoming chapters justifies the speed. Character design: The fast paced nature did make it a bit difficult to be inline with the characters. Scenes were happening too quickly to actually synergize with these characters. This affected the story by drastically reducing the emotional impacts. But again, I look forward to the coming chapters to fix that. Updating stability: move to patreon and support author if you can, I see potential in this story ❤️ World background: Can't say much since it's still being explored but seems promising. 7.8/10— I LOVE THE WRITING QUALITY UGH. Would benefit by being paced slower. Emotional scenes will hit harder. Characters will be more easier to enjoy. Your characters are a major part of what keeps the story going— never forget that author! So try the 'save the cat' technique where something minor has us rooting for MC. It really helps 😉
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.