/ Fantastique / The teacher at Hogwarts is a Dark Lord！
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Tewell Fawley, Durmstrang's finest graduate ever, arrives at Hogwarts. "One day, Muggles will be able to use science to observe magic, see through our magic, and build a mathematical model of every spell. "What will the wizards do when that day comes?" "Be locked up in a cage like a rare animal?" "Or..."
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The book I good in most aspects. Only issues so far is that the Author seems to mix up the MC’s name and the other professor’s names. Ofer MC gets called prof Flitwick, and Flitwitck gets called prof Sprout and so on.
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The story is really good but there are a lot of mistakes in the names of the characters. One gets confused about who is who.
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My concept for this novel is to make the world more united and peaceful. The story covers the unity among werewolves, wizards, people of various races, and Muggles. Particularly, Professor Lupin, a werewolf teacher, and his werewolf community are respected and help the protagonist, Teviel, create a future where Muggles and wizards coexist harmoniously. This allows wizards to benefit from Muggle technology and both communities to learn from and integrate with each other, enabling wizards, werewolves, and other hidden groups to live normally in this beautiful world and together build a stronger nation. There will be many conflicts and battles, but these are the necessary paths to greater unification.
This one is... baffling... Characters have multiple names, sometimes sharing or exchanging them. The whole dialogue sometimes can be described as 4 instances of the same persom talking to themselves. The concept and story are promising, but I have seen better writing quality in most MTLs. There are some distinct Chineese lines, but they are fine and not really hard to read.
This fan fiction is impressive, offering a bit of everything for readers. I've read up to chapter 97, and the story continues to captivate as we approach the second year. Most characters remain true to the original canon while still showcasing unique and original elements. That being said, there are quite a few problems with the wording used, mostly in the later chapters that I have read. An example would be: uses her instead of him. Still giving it 5 stars because I enjoyed a new Harry Potter fan fic coming out.
GOOD JOB, I'm waiting for the next update, Oh yeah by the way I'm curious, is Harry still with Ginny? Or changed? And I'm curious too, how long did it take you to write this novel? Honestly, this is a very good and cool novel, which definitely took some time to make
it's really interesting. It's worth reading. The only negative point is the curse that doesn't leave the MC. I could resolve this soon and reconnect with the unification of the world. Also, this looks like a Chinese translation to me, is there any link of raw you can provide? Grateful.
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