Three chapters to show nothing new. What a waste of my time. One chapter is enough for all this crap and one more paragraph to solve it all with one punch. What's so difficult? Is word count really that important?
Ninfadora Tonks, Penélope Clearwater or Fleur Delacour sounds better then Hermione, Daphne or Luna.
Update to the update: I still plan to have her as the female lead, but she will be introduced much later. She won't be cut out entirely. I like her character because she isn't in the books at all, barely a passing mention. That essentially means she's a blank slate for whatever the author wants to do, which is the reason I picked her.
Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul
Book&Literature · Lozz
When the protagonist is not the canonical MC's nanny, he ends up being the nanny of an annoying woman? And this guy achieved the feat of being both lol.
I smiled. "It seems I've been foolish lately. If you can forgive me, we'll pick everything back up again and then some. I have so much to show you! So much to teach you!" I said enthusiastically, feeling better after this little talk.
Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul
Book&Literature · Lozz
Interesting story. I'll follow it. Does anyone know the raw for this fanfic? <140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140>
So, I didn't continue to see if he regains his power. But since he lost control to reach 100% and win the battle against Black Phoenix, he loses the power of the template to get another template with the power of the Scarlet Witch and possibly start the cat and mouse hunt again. I imagine he can recover everything when the Scarlet Witch template reaches 100%. But whether he will lose it again is another question. So I dropped it.
and when he completes 100% of the powers, he loses them to start over again with the template of the scalar sorceress. And the routine of being a running street dog continues. A waste of my time
and the observation haki ceased to exist. This story is a joke
But Takumi, having donned his protective goggles, had already ridden off into the distance on his little camel.
One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks
Anime & Comics · Gered
It's the pathetic story of the canonical MC's nannies. MC seems very antisocial, but he is nice to everyone and teaches everyone without anything in return (schizophrenia maybe?). In addition to not getting into trouble for the canonical MC (I mean being his bodyguard), he seems very calm about teaching the canonical protagonist. One positive point is that Ron is not in this teaching club for obvious reasons. Overall it's not bad, but it's not my kind of protagonist. Give it a chance if you like neutral-good protagonist. By the way, so far (chapter 113), I don't know what his cheating is. He looks like a learning assistant, then he looked like an ocular talent like magic vision. This is quite confusing, but it helps him learn everything he wants faster. I've seen little content that suggests this story is Chinese, in fact I only saw a mention at the beginning about him eventually going to the East or something like that. Translation Quality - 5 | Stability of Updates - 5 | Story Development (incomplete story) - 1 | Character Design - 1 (I don't like MC) | World Background - 5 PS: The first story wasn't finished and he already started another one in volume 2. I don't recommend this incomplete story. There is no guarantee that the second will be finished before the third begins.
But he keeps running away like a stray dog? What happens to the phoenix? He kills her, she runs away from him. I was really disappointed with this loss of powers plot, even though I really liked this story.
Starting as a Class Five Mutant
Anime & Comics · Zaelum