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Kalan, a big Dragon Ball fan got run over by a Truck and died when he saved a cute little white fox. Luckily for Kalan, he's the MC of our story, thus he reincarnated into the Dragon Ball World!
Kalan's wish to be reborn as a Saiyan was granted by the Strongest System.
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This is... Bad. There's absolutely no actual story to this. All the relationships are superficial. The characters are plain... Trash. The interactions are incredibly unrealistic. The writing and grammar are terrible. Judge for yourself, just keep in mind that there's a reason that all the good reviews read like incoherent ramblings.
Fcking he is human in earth and don't know anything about love?ARE FKING THINGKING WE ARE IDIOT TO BELIVE HE IS FKING DENSE BECAUSE HE IS SAIYAN?just because u want trunkz to born?lol this is kalan story not FKING Goku and Vegeta story please be more smart... FKING i bet u love your lover be NTR before
Just Love it . Keep it up😍 Gkdhdhdydtotzyoreyeydirqtistdyxyfy9d9z5885s8z855e59e96e5idyodoyd5id8z8tt9eyoodpfyodoydyspfufupdotdtzitzitzi5Gkdhdyeyd yodtodtiz58ztidodoye69eyod
I like this story very much. There is nor many dragonball fanfiction in the first place. Make sure to make this one as good as or better than "the strongest legend of dragonball" That story is all good from the start with only a bad part at the end when there are another multiverse story included. Thus, make sure you do better than them. I will be cheering. And please don't be like some fanfiction that you just dropped it halfway and give the reason like wanting to train the writing. Anyway, thank you for the good story.
Writing quality has seriously gone downhill. Ever since the author has added more fanfictions and books on this site the release schedule has been abysmal at 1 chapter perday. Every chapter is just fluff where nothing important happens. Kalan's reduced to a measly side character who's trying to maintain the original story, but the story has already deviated too far from the original to the point where his efforts are futile. I wasn't on board the Bulma train from the get go and reccomended multiple times that he didn't romance Bulma. I don't know why Toga even paired Kalan and Bulma together in the first place if he was just going to Yamcha him. Bulma's excuse for not being together with him is because he trains to much? Lol wait till she finds out how much Vegeta trains, adding on that Vegeta can't make clones of himself. Chapter 130 is my dropping point. It felt like a big FU to my face. An entire chapter dedicated to eating food. It seems like the author is losing interest and this is going to be dropped. I'll revisit on the future to see if his writing has improved, but as of now my review stands. Haowie out!
Very good keep going when will take Brolys blood that's the question I have in my mind. Will Kalan someday have God Ki maybe learning and mastering Ultra Instinct would be cool or something similar
Good just Keep it up and keep the stable updates For the 140 word count - fxuxfixfuxufxigg jgixgxifxitsiusrrsuuraaruhRrajrfssgkgzgxkogcdhdksgurgxxkgxogxxyxtditdraqwwetyyuiooppllkjhggfddsazzzxxccvvbnmmmknjj
This one of the best dbz fanfic I've read so far. keep up the good story. Hopefully this doesn't somehow up with mc teleporting to say the walking dead with zero power. But yea good story n developments also great update times. This time of story deserves my ss. 😁👍👍🤓
I QUIT. Wtf man? Everyone wants bulma and kalan but they broke srsly when it drop from 2 chapters everyday to 1-2 chapters everyday i still didn't comment anything about it but kalan and bulma should be together. Kalan even wish eternal youth for bulma whats the use of that now? Your novel is getting good to bad bad to worst it sucks. Just get kalan apologize to bulma and get them back together. This chapter sucks.
GREAT NOVEL BEST DRAGON BALL FANFIC IVE READ IN MY LIFE GREAT STORY AND DEVELOPMENT WONDERFUL CHAPTER RELEASE DATE I HOPE YOU TAKE IT TO THE NEXT LEVEL AND MAKE A MASTERPIECE I LOVE IT PLEASE KEEP YOUR GOOD WORK
This novel is not original ....there is chinese translation "The strongest legend of dragon ball". There is only slight deviation from chinese novel...almost all the stroy development is taken from that.."till now".
Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter...... hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
:))))))) Very Good :))))))) Very Good :))))))) Very Good :))))))) Very Good :))))))) Very Good :))))))) Very Good :))))))) Very Good :))))))) Very Good 140crt
To put it simply this is a wish-fulfillment fanfic. The author makes an odd reason to save the Saiyans. With the mc saying something along the line of not all Sayians are evil. The pacing in this story is awful for the timeline; I would be more understanding if it was done at the beginning of Dbz or super, but it's done in the original DB since the mcs plans as said before. Lastly, what ruins it for me is that the system is helping him with everything. Not a guide but everything is due to the system hardly any credit could be given to the mcs strength or intelligence. Cons- Badly written wish fulfillment fanfic Pros- Pretty decent grammar from what I skimmed through. If you don't care for the plot and just care for the powers then this is for you. Overall- 2.7-5
Please don't read this. It's obviously not good due to it being a system-related sub-genre, when the only thing numbers related in dragon ball is the power levels. Which itself was outdated to it's irrelevancy when it came to stronger beings. There's no substance in this, just endless rambling, don't read.
Good story hope you keep up with it and hope the best for you how about letting him create his own style of fighting after he gets some experience🔝
It was pretty interesting in the beginning. a few complaints about overly relying on the system instead of actually thinking for himself but it was bearable. I won't say too much about the whole story, but I can say undoubtedly the worse thing to happen was his relationship with Bulma and kalans hard on for training. it started off good but took a huge dive as the mc apparently stopped knowing how to put in any effort into anything besides training. he starts a dojo with the intention to build faith and then doesn't even introduce himself to the students for 2 years because of training. he saves his race with the intention to build faith and then never visits them for several years to the point where 90% of the population doesn't even know him. he starts a relationship with Bulma that works out at the beginning where they spend time together traveling the world only for him to completely ruin it because he spends years at a time training. even Goku and Vegeta managed to train on earth and don't usually stay gone from their families for longer than a year at most in Z and super. and they become strong enough to fight gods. if he uses the system to do anything else I don't see why he didn't use it to build his own improved time chamber like Dende's that lets you go in more than twice if he really needs to spend years at a time training certain forms. in the end the problem wasn't the training, but as I said, it was his lack of effort in anything else. he becomes so forgetful to the point where it's painful (like completely forgetting to teach any of his students how to even use ki which was the whole point of him making the dojo in the first place. so they recognize ki isn't magic or fake). it was like the older he got the dumber he got. i'm sure kalan would and could have asked the system to keep memo's for him so he remembers to do things. my problem is he never tried to compromise when he definitely could have. it gets to the point where half the time i forget he's in the story because he doesn't say anything and just watches everyone or goes to train. well, I rant because I care. everything up until the end of the Dragonball saga was really enjoyable, but it's like the author stopped caring after that. i liked the new history on planet sadala. i liked how he actually tried to think to assassinate Frieza. i liked some of the new races although they were horrendously underdeveloped. i loved his relationship with bulma in the beginning because he acted like a normal human being. i liked the idea of him having to gather faith energy to get stronger although that went nowhere basically since he forgot about it. i liked that super saiyan 4 managed to find a way in the story in a pretty believable way. i liked how funny the dragonball saga was in general. but again things just fell off after that. mc got dumber and less likable.
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I'm not a fan of dragon ball but definitely am fan of this novel. Author way of explaining things and developing story is easy to understand even for me who only watch DBZ where goku still a kid with tail and power pole. Overall good explanation, great development, good MC, relaxing and serious at the right time. The system is not as much cheat as other novel but still play great role in MC's adventure.
The writings quality is good, just need some fine tuning here and there but overall is great. The idea on the other hand is not fresh at all. Just another stale DG fanfic where the mc becomes saiyan (it's not stale, maybe rotten?) Throw some system there (oh it's a inherited one, got some goodies from predecessor) and there you have it. I am not against the system here, but reborn as saiyan? It's like you have great cooking skills but instead of using a fresh ingredients you just make do with something stale, and use ordinary/common way to cook it. There's no uniqueness no novelty in it. If you instead make your mc becomes other than a saiyan even if it's just an earthling it will let the readers experience something different.
The best. Everything is perfect. This is THE BEST dragon ball fanfic. . Please don't drop this. And don't rush the story, like many other fanfics. Keep up the good work.