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A common (patriot) joe from our world died as a true American… during a mass shooting in his building. He wakes up in an unknown world, where people have weird powers called ‘Quirks’ and women go around wearing spandex fighting crime… and why can he pull a rocket launcher out of his arse, and why it is so familiar? Time to show these maggots what a true soldier is.
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Also an additional thanks to the creator of "Star Platinum in MHA", who through his fanfic gave me the key on a very important aspect of this fanfic. Read to find out.
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The cover is gold. Enough already! add this to your library this instant! Wow! Amazing!
This book has a lot of potential, the MC is likeable and the author has a good grasp on his character. The writing is also very good, very little typos and grammar errors. It has a R18 tag too so hehe... only 4 chaps for now but I except a lot!
great novel it's been a while since I've read a tf2 fanfic novel, and it's done pretty well mc is able to match soldiers characteristics very nicely over all it's an amazing novel shame there's not much chapters but the chapters are very long outweighing it it's a good read if your looking to take your mind off something for awhile
It's made me laugh. It's made me cry. the MC is the soldier, a pure bag of American testosterone. It's an amazing book, with very long chapters that make up for the fact that there are only 16 chapters at the time of writing. Give it a shot, and you'll love it.
love it, best FF I have ever read.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I can't wait to see where this novel gos. ........................................................................................................
It has comedy, It has Patriotism. And great TF2 references. Sadly I was never a soldier main... But I can heavily recommend this novel as it is one of the top shelf My Hero fanfics I could find on this site.
This is a MUST read, FF is just amazing. Writing Quality 10/10 author rarely makes any mistakes (I havent seen any but just in case) and it is super easy to read. The updates are slower than alot but it makes up for it by being amazing and a bit longer than alot of other FFs. Story development is VERY good for a FF (RIP you were a good soldier), from Side characters to the Main character everyone has a solid foundation instead of them saying one or two line that repeats itself. Character Design is amazing. World Background is also amazing and it starts out a bit different than most MHA FFs. All in all FF is top tier. Now why i think it isnt shown as top tier? in my opinion it might be the name or the background of the FF that might make alot of the readers not want to read it, i was one of them but i wish i hadnt. Alot of people might not see how a soldier and MHA might go together and just think its a plain FF but it isnt, its a hidden gem. Also it might be the updates bc it isnt really shown daily like many other FF and that might be why noone is seeing it that much. Thx for this amazing FF and keep up the good work!
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This is such a good way to relax and have a good time reading and would make you except the unknown because of the main character is different from the others.
you did real good author *salute* my only complaint is i want more chaps so if you can comply we will have a 5 out of 5 fic have a nice day and goodluck
I think i forgot to leave a review so ill do it now. FF is amazing and unique, Instead of your average edgy emo mc you have yourself a patriot! Writing Quality is amazing, no mistakes and the author leaves some notes for you to read if you dont understand it, Updates are a little slow but the story itself makes it okay. Story development is amazing, not even in cannon yet and im already to see what will happen. Character Design is great, Mc and Side characters are amazing, most are authors oc and they are well developed and the Orignal oc that are showed in the new chapters are also developed really well, World Background is great its in MHA world (in the title you should already know) but it doesnt start in japan instead U.S and shows the differences in it. Hoping for Author to not drop and keep it up. Its going to be interesting how a Military Student goes into a Hero school where they cant even control their emotions yet, let alone their quirks
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I cant say about writing quality cuz im not native( Im russian ) I love story so far, dad being the Best Dad i read but its sad that he died, and to be honest i cry a little The Patriot of America being in Army with others America characthers make me laugh like are madman...or Principal Nezu. Mha being Mha have some good quirks and summoning weapon very good quirk i may say. and that statistic u make my brain go brrrrr(in bad way cuz im gonna forhet about it ;( ) Would he see others TF2 charaters? or overwatch and Avengers? I mean if u have some good ideas about interactions its goonna be good. And Son always remember Quality above Updates P.S. Sorry about other rev
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You were good son, real good, maybe even the best. - Soldier R.I.P Rick May 😭, you will be in our hearts forever Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh YOU MAGGOTS!
I love it, I just love it, as a fan of TF2 and MHA this is something I never would have expected to see in a fan fic but the Auhor sure did surprise me. I recommend reading it because it is worth it.
I found it so far extremely hilarious and that is good enough reason for a stars. The reference and jokes were quite funny plus AMERICA and *patriotism. No more needs to be said,
The only thing i can say is... God bless America. .............................................................................. ..............................................................................
EARLY REVIEW(Chapter 4): Good start with interesting new system of quirks. Had to say the plot twist with his father was kind of unexpected but it services the plot so whatever. No grammar mistakes (at least to me), new and refreshing plot, and good setup for future events. This read would take you probably 15 minutes since the chapters are somewhat long so that's a plus. Hope you continue this and don't drop Good luck author!!
Hey! Author here! This is my honest review of what I expect from my own work and how it will turn out. Writing Quality - 5 stars (I know English pretty well, and I use both Microsoft word and Grammarly to fix the rest. Most mistakes are probably gonna be words with some missing letters because my keyboard sucks.) Stability of Updater - 3 stars (I want to be hopeful here, but i can never be sure, you known, gotta a life and all that.) Story Development - 5 stars (From what I imagined and refined, it looked awesome, really top tier, and the first chapter turn out pretty chill and that's good since I tried making a fanfic before and the first chapter was already impossible.) Character Design - 5 stars (My character is gonna be the most perfect replica of the soldier from team fortress 2, no matter how long it takes, and it will not be forced, since i'm gonna make explanations as to why his personality turn out to be like this. World Background - 4 stars (Not very good in doing world backgrounds, but since this is MHA i think I'm gonna have an easy time, so let's be hoperful.)