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The Sequinned Potential [VOLUME 1] - The Green Crystal of Meyercliffe
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Synopsis
The Sequinned Potential is a group of heroes with exceptional powers made with the intention to defeat evil forces. But now as a dark wizard threatens the humankind, the team finds itself in deep peril, especially when the sacred green crystal that made them more powerful is stolen from their keep.
With a desperate attempt to recover the crystal and save the mankind, they need more warriors; people with supernatural powers as themselves.
Destiny and Cara are cousins. They are like best of friends but both of them have been hiding a secret from their mothers; Cara can see things that nobody can, whereas, Destiny possesses an extreme sense of alertness and flexibility. When a mysterious stranger follows them around and informs that they belong to Meyercliffe and are a part of a team, they are completely thrown off-guard.
With a world unknown waiting for them, will they be able to be a part of The Sequinned Potential and recover the crystal and defeat the evil?
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I'll be honest, not much world-building going on. There was a lot of dialogue between characters and little narration to explain the world, the characters, the team. When there is being something explained, sometimes it is short and hard to understand. For example in chapter 2. When the daughter went and picked up her aunt and cousin. it skipped from the car ride straight back to the house with the meeting between the aunt and mother. Things need to be fleshed out more to not create a bad sequence of events. Other than that, the update rate is simply low. If you are able to increase it in the future, that would be great for your story.
There definitely is a lack of updates to be seen. I would also say work on less rumbustious descriptions, they are sometimes a bit much to read. Overall though, good beginning to a story and I hope you continue writing and get into a consistent groove of it. :P
Author Mahasweta, Your writing style just makes Me visualise every single thing that is happening in the book...... It's so realistic.....when I read Your book I truly feel as if I'm watching a film..... Everything is so crystal clear in front of My Eyes........ My Best Wishes For You..... May You Become A Great Writer Someday..... And I Know That You Will, One Day......!!!!! You are Really Very Talented, You Truly have a Fantastic Writing Skill...... Keep It Up...... All The Best For Your Future Works. ❤❤😊😊