Synopsis
Avalin is a young woman who has been living her life obliviously. She doesn't know who she is or what the world has become.
But what Avalin has always known is the man from her shadows.
He follows her consistently even when she is not aware.
Avalin has never seen his face; he always hides in the darkness watching her every move. Waiting for trouble to strike just for him to show up in the moment.
Avalin never understood his motives or his overprotectiveness. One thing Avalin has found about him is he has too many secrets. So many that even she wants to know.
she ends up finding out for herself feeling betrayed by her own protector, but what made her feel this way?
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well, the story is good. thank you author for sharing this wonderful story.♥️
Abolutely captivated by your story about Avalin😊..The chemistry between Avalin and the enigmatic guy who constantly stalks her adds an alluring and suspenseful layer to the story✨❤️. The plot twists and turns keep readers on the edge of their seats❤️..Kudos to the author 🤗
hello! first of all i want to thank the author for sharing this wonderful story to us. been a fun read. so, as i read through the story, here the things i will say: about the writing quality, there are some spelling errors now and then, but it is not enough to affect the overall reading experience. it is also understandable to have those mistakes because you were just a new writer back then, however, i saw the significant improvement as the story progresses, i hope you can continue the pace the story development is good, there are no boring moments and its chapter builds up excitement, that's what im looking for in a story i couldnt say much about the character design and update stability because im only just in the early chapters, so i give them 5 stars. the world background was addressed in chapter 7 onwards, and it was mentioned well overall, the story is good. no boring parts and every chapter gives a sense of excitement for the readers. i hope you keep up the good work author
I like the mysterious and sensual vibes at the beginning. And also the dynamics between Avalin, her master and Grith. There were a lot of unexpected scenes which left me surprised. :-)
I love your narration style, a little bit long but not boring. The way the characters act are so natural, I can feel the drama and their connection.
Your work is definitely a diamond in the rough, dear author. Keep up the good work!! The story line is unique and interesting as well as your characters. Though you might want to go back and check for a little bit in its improvement. Otherwise, keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
Hey, hey hey! You should all check this book out! It's so intriguing and captivating at the same time! It's got on my nerves, the story is really giving me the creeps! ❤
I really like the progress of this story so far. The story is truly captivating and i just wanna keep on reading ot and never stop. I cant wait to see what's going to happen next. Keep up the good work👍🏼
I like the story very much, within a few minutes I was at chapter 7 , I didn’t even realised how much I was into the novel. It is simple yet beautifully written. I just hope you keep the chapters a little longer. Too short I believe. But keep it up. Sorry for not leaving any comments I was so caught up with the novel, I forgot to leave some comments.😂😂 Protective ML are the best… But I am definitely reading and supporting….
Hey! So I read through your book and would like to write a review. So if you are wondering whether I like the book or not? Yeah I do, it has an interesting approach and the character development looks like a mystery drama approach! Thats why I gave 5 stars for character development. The only big issue I see is that the world hasn’t been introduced yet, maybe descriptions of the environment? I hope this is helpful to you. Also the writing quality is great save for a couple of typos but thats no reason to take off a star. The first person view seems based on inner monologue and inner conflicts as far as I have seen and I am impressed. As a more experienced author, I suggest you describe the environment more to connect the reader to the environment.