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The Legend of Astra
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In a world where Arks ruled the battlefield...
In a world where the line between magic and technology is blurred....
In a world where... "uhh... how do you read this again?"
"It's 'Rendezvouz'!!! How many times do I have to remind you?!!"
In a world where fate rendezvouz... "ugh... why do I feel like this sentence is wrong..?"
"Just read it already!!!"
"And why does it have to be me?!"
"No...isn't that because you lost at Rock-Paper-Scissors?"
"And who wrote such cringey lines?!"
"Of course it was made by yours truly. It's about my tale after al--"
"Astra!!!"
"Yes madam?"
". . . can I just make a cooler version?"
"Hell no! I poured all my blood and sweat into making that piece--"
*rip* *rip* *rip*
"NOOOOOO!!!!"
"Ahem.... anyway..."
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In a distant land, in a distant realm, from a distant universe, a young man was transported into a world of magic and machines.
As an ignorant--
"MY PIIIEEEECCCCEEE!!!!"
*Smack* *Smack* *Smack*...*Thud*.
As an ignorant young man of another world, his destiny coincides with a young noble lady who takes him as her war slave. Slaves that accompany their master from life to death. Both in peace and war.
And so, his legend, as the strongest Ark Meister began...
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Keep up the good chapters for me will ya this is like the the anime I love it please make more! Make it that he makes himself an ark a custom ark where it is super op that uses a sniper gun and where he has a black katana that stick on his right leg where he can just get it men I love mechas but not Gundam I watched to many of it that it's not interesting anymore please make more of these thing please I love it.
I'll be frank. You should just stop writing your other book and just focus on this one. This one's got a lot more promise than that one. Or on second thoughts, don't stop that. Just focus more in here. I still want more Arkenvalle after all.
Although story is good and writing is great, the amount of plot holes is so massive, that its feels like the story is made up off all the plot holes glued together. And mc character makes it even worse. How the hell can anyone be okay after becoming a slave and being treated as such. Mc wasn't born a slave in this different world, but got turned into one by his own stupidity and he is okay with that.
Now this is interesting...An actual fantasy mecha this time... Keep it up, bruh. I like your MC [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I'm a benevolent man who values talent and hard work. For updating your books daily, you get 5 stars👍 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This description alone makes me want to give this 5 stars. No matter how bad or cringy this story be ( I haven't read it yet) you author have a loyal fan.