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The Kitsune Demon ( Dropped )
4.13 (18 audimat)
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Naruto fuses with Kurama turning him into something more.
This will be a harem novel.
Not my cover If the original user wants me to take it down I will.
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Im sorry I just cant stand this story anymore. Its just terrible after the remake. Why did the author remake it, honestly the first one was so much better than this. > -: Your gay !!!!! 😞
BOORING!!!!!! nah,,I am being an ass.....honestly though this is boring, the MC SI as naruto, another cliche...read chp 2....everything is rushed and some parts dont even make sense, like why wasnt kurama surprised that MC knew his name?, its just glossed over..also the ****? when did they even get close?....also how the hell did iruka even get naruto?, and why did he of all people get naruto? I mean he is just a normal dude and he is a kid, like 12 or something, plus he hated naruto [in cannon]... so many mistakes and rushed **** that stories ****ty and stupid..no bash..its boring and dosnt make sense
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WE NEED THIS REWRITE PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I’m really liking what you’ve done with the characters and how you given him the seven sins. That was a good call. I’m wondering how things are gonna play out with Hinata though.
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this is no doubt a good one i myself have tries to write on several occasions but it wasn't anything good so i know how tough it is, but how just everything just works out for naruto is just too funny
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Bonne histoire bien que beaucoup ne vont pas aimer je donne tout mon soutient a l'auteur j'ai hâte de voir la suite merci pour votre travail . surtout n'abandonner pas pour quelque commentaire haineux beaucoup de Fan-fiction son abandonné a cause de ça ...
This book is quite interesting with how he essentially fused with Kurama. I honestly at first didn't think I would like the book as much as I do keep up the great work.
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Verry interestin and looking good only down side is update rate hopping for more 😁😁😁😁😁😁 🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊
Its good but it needs a continuous update schedule to be great Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssaaaaaaaaa
the only thing i can think would be better is if he used the meditation to make a mindscape the organize all his past and recent memories giving him photographic and eidetic memorie so he can learn alot faster and change the kyubi seal sewer so he doesn't have to keep laying down in water that has to be irritating his fur and he cant even swim in it
ITS SUPER GOOD !!! A SUPER GOOD BEGINING ! I WILL WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER BUT PLEASE NOT TOO MUCH NEVER GOOD TO WAIT TOO MUCH !! MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR !
Some things in the story at the begining dont make since but at this point its looking good he or she makes sure overall evrything is good and I quite like tge story also the reason why iruka got Naruto is in the first chapter and please people like amature author take your negativity and bad comments else where if you hate the story you should probably leave anyways this story is nice and I think in the end this will be a pretty good story and better than some other stories one here.
I like where the story is going so far i hope you keep it up(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง(ง⸌ᴥ⸍)ง
Any interaction done in this story is dry, makes no sense, and is just completely based on mc plot armor that is soo thicccc is would give resident evil characters a run for their money. First the mc asks kurama to give him all her power and yep, she says yeah sure but I hate humans so I'll make you something other than human...what the hell? Then he talks like a full grown ***** for his first words ever and asks for books about HISTORY AND JUTSU, I'm just thinking to myself, ("bruh if they don't think this is a demon baby I'm done") well the person just nods and says yeah sure come with me. Demon baby proceeds to make an illusion called gates of hell for no reason thinking it was a good idea and once he's done they just say they will talk about it when he's older. There's alot more trash in this story but I'm not gonna keep going. Basically NPC interactions with everything and everyone and is just another bad story that will be filled with things that are incredibly thicccc in plot armor with no originality.
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