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The hymn of vivshi
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Synopsis
to be born into a world absent of freedom. Vivshi Viltrano witnesses the world’s horrid truth. stricken of his freedom, the powers of liberation flow forth and ascend him to another plane.
In the world, Aeons represents different human state of mind forms, giving life to humans with those with the best affinity.
12 Aeons exist in the world but the day Vivshi is activated, the world goes out of balance. Some strive to end him, others befriend him.
To continuously strive for his freedom and the freedom of others, he slowly pieces together a picture of what true liberty is like.
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I really would like to read more after chapter 30. Something ominous seems to be lurking in the background. Vivshi is gonna go through revolution.
Well first off the explaination of the world background needs to be addressed, and i’d like it if you gave more detail into how characters, backgrounds and objects looked but other than that the writing is pretty great and you update quite consistently ffrom what I can see. So just keep going
Great writing quality, just needs a bit more work on the world background. But still, very nice updating stability but go to sleep for once. By the way, perhaps you'll need a proof-reader~
Hi, Hotasianboy here! This is my first time writing a lengthy novel like this. I hope you guys enjoy everything my novel has to offer! If you guys have any questions please comment and I will respond as fast as I can. If you guys are wondering this novel is going to be around 300 chapters long. I have a lot planned out and I hope you guys will be able to experience this story with me! ^^
I love a book like this, but you need to tell me more about the background