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The Disastrous Life of a Gamer
4.55 (61 audimat)
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What will you do when in the middle of the night, you will wake up with a wild Deadpool standing in front of your bed ?
And how will you react when your entire life will turn into a game?
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(Google translate) The idea in this story is good, but at certain points MC behaves like an inadequate person, take, for example, the scene when Rias's servants tried to contact him and invite him to talk, he even started scolding and insulting them (why?) It is quite normal that after this they wanted to beat him up and teach him a lesson (it is quite logical, other people in this situation would have done the same), from the actions of the MC it is clear that he himself went into conflict, but showed everything as if he was innocent, and try to intimidate him in every possible way (like the young masters in Chinese novels ghosts). Now another question, why does everyone have such hatred for Rias? In 7/10 of DxD fanfiction Rias is made an idiot and humiliated in every possible way, in 2/10 she is ignored or disposed of as a hindrance, and only in 1/10 MC has a normal romantic relationship with her. The way she shows herself in the original is quite normal for her status and what family she is in (9/10 people in her position would behave the same way, and possibly even worse, for example, like Riser or Diodora), in many other fan fictions according to others anime, too, there are often such cases, which depressing and killing the desire to continue reading.
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I respect the dxd arc but when he went to the Naruto arc he just turned from chill to villainous, it kind of threw me off, you should put it in the tags.
This was a great read at first and it was pretty good for the DXD ark but when the Naruto ark started the MC's personality took a 90 degree turn from a calm and chill guy to a villianous guy and also why does everyone hate on Rias because like most fanfictions that have DXD in it nowadays usually portray Rias as this villianous person that would sacrificed Issei to force him to become her slave or if that does not happen the MC would be a a*s kisser but in the anime Rias does not treat Issei as a slave and she only did what she did because it would benefit her and the whole Riser situation and also the MC is such a moron for no reason like he demands respect from one of the most powerful familys in the world and not from his own powers but from the powers of a butler that was given to him and that gives off the reason why the MC became somebody that is chill and calm but his personality turned into someone who once given power will exploit it to no end which includes demanding respect for having a backer that iis powerfuk but he is not that powerful and being arrogant then blaming people of why they are attacking him so overall this is a decent read for the DXD ark but when the Naruto ark starts it feels as if the Author just randomly added this ark into the story because he needed some content and it seemed rushed other than that and some other minor hiccups it is a decent read.
First of I want to say that very rarely do I write "thorough" reviews for fics in this app, however when I do write said reviews it is because I find the story to be enjoyable and while containing the ability to be or and continue to be a good story. (I never had the opportunity to read the story before you took it up from your girlfriend but if what you have provided is anything to go by, then I say that she probable wrote a good story.) Nonetheless enough of that and into the actual review, that story provides a good pace in were events don't necessarily seem rushed but were the story also doesn't feel like fluff. It isn't your typical rias a*s-kissing story either which I absolutely loved. The story also avoids quite a bit of clichés that you would expect for Gamer fics. The grammar of the actual story is actually quite good, which is always a plus. Overall, writing this reviews when there are only nine chapters out I can say that this story is quite the fun read, it provides a different plot then what most would follow. That is to say that I would recommend this story but you must simply have an open-mind for something different (something different that is actually good) if you are unable to do so then just skip that story and don't try to take away from someone who is simply letting their creativity run. 8.25/10
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Love gamer fiction novels it was good with a nice class twist but started to feel boring after the introduction of the overpowered butler, plus the system felt neglected.
1. MC fight head on with devil faction, i say it stupid, he is weak but act like mighty young master, why dont he move temporary to other place ?? or have protection from other faction ?? because you pride to not "serve" ?? are mc too stupid to not know what it is deceptive or low-key and accumulating power ?? 2. in Naruto world , "MC is Genius on par with Nara clan..." thats jiraya opinion.. when you trying to be normal and reasonable , i bet jiraya also give you title "Genius".
Mad respect to the dxd arc, Mad respect, but that's where it all goes down hill to me, the personality goes through a complete 180 when he reaches the Naruto arc, and catches me completely off guard. I keep hoping for the old mc personality to come back, but more and more, I find the mc's personality getting worse and worse. Dark Mc's are fine. But Don't just say "Hey, I want to be Dark!" Without going through anything. My 3 stars were out of respect to the dxd Arc. Good luck on your novel
The only times I do reviews is when I really like something or I'm frustated with something, that being said, I'm frustated with this FF. The story is pretty cool, a lot of interesting elements that I've never seen before, BUT, there's one problem, there isn't ONE dialogue between two people in this story that sounds like a real conversation. Everytime the MC is alone the story is really good, if he's talking to someone, then the story tanks to a reeeally bad one. But hey, that's just my opinion, you could read it and still enjoy it, at the end of the day the people doing fanfic are not obligated to be god tier writers. Much love.
I got interested reading the synopsis of this ff and i think its a creative, cool idea and has good grammar ,now to the negative sides, in my opinion its kind of cringey and has lots of unnecessary info that not adding much to the story, its very cliche at some points aswell, mc is not smart and is taught by the system. overall i think its a very good idea and has good potential , if you like mc who doenst follow rias perriage and is op you should give this fanfic a chance.
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I have to say compared to most dxd stories ‘‘tis is unique. Look forward to more. Hey though how bout making another story with an angel self insert story. Just a thought I don’t think I’ve ever seen a pure angel self insert story before.
history has a future I hope to see it just and I hope it does not fall they always do it apart from that excellent story............................
The way you wrote the dialogue felt dead to me it was like you were telling what they were saying instead of the character saying it. The stuff with sirzechs was completely over the top like in hp fic making Dumbledore Extremely evil instead of the Greater Good version he is in canon and in most fics.
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Que mal a mi me gustaba la historia anterior pero esta tampoco esta mal https://youtu.be/dxNXpISsCyQ https://youtu.be/1crYIqCO5Hc https://youtu.be/m6y3PRPmq0s https://youtu.be/ZxoKUVBUfCQ https://youtu.be/602fFZur8fU https://youtu.be/VtX_9bAFIyA https://youtu.be/4HlN4FPdi2w https://youtu.be/KrnHlCvlL3E https://youtu.be/jm5cRtcnlS4 https://youtu.be/EtjsIz0ocUU https://youtu.be/3Yuar0DZ8sM https://youtu.be/ygbGgBeGpOk https://youtu.be/ghU6PbZzfSI https://youtu.be/ghU6PbZzfSI https://youtu.be/JK3D0FCrDpA https://youtu.be/hyMPdcPh8yk https://youtu.be/hDMXOSFixHc https://youtu.be/lw4oNXCYznM https://youtu.be/9bDNEuoejsc
well it's a nice book I hope the author of this book would continue to write books like this
Short but sweet. It wasn't the best fanfic I've read but definitely not the worst. It was a fun way to spend time on a weekend.
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I'm really surprised that so many people like my novel and I want to thank you all for giving this novel a try and I appreciate all of the help you guys did to correct my mistakes or give me new ideas to implement.