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Succubus System At Hogwarts

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Auteur: Dragonel23

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Synopsis

Ian transmigrated into the world of Harry Potter and became Harry Potter's younger brother.

As soon as he opened his eyes, a green light rushed towards his face!

At the critical moment of life and death, Ian bound himself to the Succubus System, and from then on began his journey of breaking up couples.

Hermione: They are both from pure-blood families in the wizarding world yet Ian is more handsome than Ron. I choose Ian!

Ginny: Both are saviors, but Ian is more handsome and stronger than Harry. I choose Ian!

Fleur: Ian saved my sister, so it's normal for me to choose him, right?

Harry & Ron & Bill: NO!!!

Ian: Sorry, guys but it's getting late. Girls let's go to my bedroom!
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#This is a Translation!#
Original MTL: Hogwarts: I am the savior, and I am breaking up couples!

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  2. The_divine_Demon
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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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Azdal
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Male version of a Succubus is an Incubus.

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LiveandLove

No slapping, arrogance, humiliation or bias of the author I don't know if the MC is an antihero or a villain but his acting skills are top notch lol

3mth
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JasonReilly05

First chapter and I'm already hooked on the story. 💯💯💯💯💯

3mth
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No_1_islookin

ok, this is not a smut. It's a Harry Potter twin little brother. Tge story has a wonderful plot that stays close to cannon but with the writer's on quorks. His system as the Mc says himself " has to check on it to make sure it's not dead". For the most part up the broom class it's been mc x Hermione.

2mth
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KuNaLsAmA

Came because of the title but I'm hooked 😂

3mth
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JamesJollyBond

Another good hp fic. added to library! 😉

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3mth
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Shafeen

I was here to criticize it for $@xulizing but I really like the story and it's cute and not pe*vert@d😍😍😍[img=update].................................

2mth
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A_wall1206

out of curiosity did you steal this from another author or did you simply take parts from another fic and not give credit?

2mth
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Zaelum

Good enough. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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3mth
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Wuelo
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Great ff. It's a smooth reading, plot is slow paced and well written. I can't wait for more chapters

2mth
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MilkLover

When I first approached this story, I did so with no expectations whatsoever. I thought it would be just another passing hp fic, something to occupy my time. However, I quickly found myself completely captivated. This is one of those rare stories that really draws you in and holds your attention. Please upload more!!

2mth
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The_divine_Demon

Thank god a good some what devious mc instead of a beta🫶

3mth
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pEmKayS
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I'm really shocked, but despite the description, it turned out to be a really good Harry Potter fanfic. It is still noticeable that the author is Chinese, but there are absolutely no complaints about the quality of the translation.

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ItzWaqaz

keep it up ,keep updating We r waiting ..

1mth
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taking_cat

I fking like this MC[img=recommend]...........................................................................................................................

3mth
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Chandan001

Good translation, good dialogues, good humor, has Cassandra Vole as a love interest. Nice book overall[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3mth
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Salihm

This is an interesting story. Seeing how these characters interact and get along is really fun. However, I hope the author stops portraying Harry as the goofy older brother, living in the shadow of his super-special younger sibling. That kind of approach is dull. It would be much more interesting if each brother had their own strengths and weaknesses, complementing each other. After all, at the end of the story, what defeated young Tom was Lily's love. It would be fascinating to see that love represented again through the twins, rather than a conclusion where absolute power is the only deciding factor. Of course, this is just my opinion, but this approach would certainly make the story far more engaging.

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Shurin
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im a bit conflicted with this one tbh. pros: theres a lot of dialogue and things happening, despite the pace actually being slow since at almost 40 theyre not even halfway through the first year. This makes it easy, fun and light to read. cons: the characters. Hermione, steadfast, levelheaded and cool has been reduced mostly to a smart little girl with a big crush as her only personality trait. Harry is outshined in everything by MC and has also been dumbed down it feels. He doesn't feel cool or strong like the original but just kind of... there? As for MC, he's fine but it doesnt feel very satisfying when he ets stronger. Bad at quidditch? Put points into it and now youre amazing! I hope to see him actually struggle unless ofc this is what author want. As for his personality idk. It'd be fun to see him say and do some unhinged and slytherin-like things sometimes, or do more "evil" acts, since despite him having some out of pocket thoughts once in a while, his actions and words are certainly that of a golden boy

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Ichika_the_best

I love the story BUT I hate the fact the MC is a simp for his girls.

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ek_tha_tiger

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