i like how you rewrote this combining both your fast and furious fics. i think the talismans and shadow kahn are better suit for soneone like this versus the more soft jessie the system didnt do justice to this originally.
12 chapters in and the story itself gets mixed up not to mention he hasnt even left the compound most chapters are the system talking theirs barely any interaction between characters. not worth reading.
wasnt hayley already resurrected?
shit translation author didnt even proof read or isnt a native english speaker dont bother reading
Ce livre a été supprimé.
so far so good. i enjoyed it better then the other few pjo fics on here keep it up
how can you say its been edited when my dog can produce better grammar then this shit
come back to this book!!!! we need more of it!!!
ill give 3 stars as i made it a few chapters in its a good concept but you need to get a proofreader or something because its all over the place. but im dropping this fic good luck.
so far so good 2 chapters down i look forward to more just keep writing dont listen to haters and take criticism with a grain of salt. write the story you want to see.
i honestly think damon should have been killed for what he did to caroline. but its like everyone forgot that he raped her and made her his chew toy for weeks.
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