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Star Wars: Darth Hassan
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The rise of an unknown Sith Lord.
Waking up on Geonosis in the body of his game avatar on an alien world? Hassan must find his place in this new world.
{Author: SinSegi}
https://ficbook.net/authors/2682348
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Overall I find it an interesting read. It was definitely very rocky at the start with descriptions, dialogue and the overall idea of a person’s game avatar becoming their body in the Star Wars universe not being very well implemented at the start. However, as chapters go by, I can already see a marked improvement in all areas of writing, and I think a good example of that was simply the improvement in description and flow of writing that we see in the nightmare sequence. Also, if you end up reading this, author, I wouldn’t take a lot of comments on mc’s morality to heart as the average Webnovel reader is used to reading wish fulfillment stories with amoral or completely immoral mc’s that usually lack greater depth, not to say that it isn’t somewhat a wish fulfillment story, but still is good you are making an an attempt to add depth to your characters. One thing I would personally recommend if you want to take the time is to just check over the wiki a little bit to better familiarize yourself with the Star Wars races, but that’s Something that’s really up to your own discretion. Anyway, have fun writing the story, I’ll try to keep up to date with it.
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This novel is like a summer TV series for me. You know, the man is the mafia (but he doesn't want to be the mafia, ask him, he is the mafia), and there is the girl (the girl is also very, very good-hearted). The girl and the boy fall in love and the girl tries to set the boy on a good path. They both act meaninglessly and revolve around each other constantly. MC calls himself darts, but he never serves the dark side. Kendiai isn't exactly Jedida. but he could describe himself as a neutral user of power. so the jedi wouldn't turn on him. But no, he wanted to be seen as the first Sith when not a single Sith had been seen for almost a thousand years. Frankly, it didn't interest me.
Although, the grammar is quite good I can't rate it any higher than a 3.6 because for one the protagonist is actually a simp and two he isn't really a "Darth". Like bro actually healed the girl who tried to kill him and fix her image of him. How does that make any sense?
My honest opinion so far. The title can be majorly misleadin . This guy is not a true sith, unless he slowly evolves into one. Writing quality is good. One of the few fics on this app that you don’t have to spend time wondering what the author actually meant. Him simping over some girl he just met (Shakti) was majorly off puttin . I don’t know if it was meant as a comedic factor or not. But it brings the characters sanity into question and the way he acts is irritatin . Sure he is a guy that got dropped in the scenario impromptu. But the way he acts throws you off. If he is pretending to be a Sith. Then act the part. Or just go with the grey force user , that might turn to the dark side in the future. Another gripe I have is the lack of world knowledge being used . A glaring example was implying slave one was a defenceless shuttle.
С русского переводят на англ ес че, так что можно почитать загуглив название на русском.
Writing and grammar is fine but the story started interesting but got boring after a few chapters so over all mid................................................................
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No grammar issues, very promising story, and I like how the mc is op but kinda clueless. I hope you can keep up this update stability cause Im starving for more
A fantastic idea for a fanfic, with good story line and grammar etc. Yet ultimately I found the obsession with women to be a tad disturbing
He writes excellently, holds our attention, expresses the details, thoughts and features of the characters very well, something that helps a lot to imagine the story. The plot is extremely interesting, and I eagerly await each chapter to find out where the work will go next.
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Book is interesting and fun. Not many Star Wars books where the MC is a sith. Almost always they choose to be Jedi or Grey Jedi. His powers and direction also feel unique. At times the MC also feels deranged but somehow this doesn’t take away from him.
Best fanfic ever created. Love the author's unique take on the story. Keep up the good work man.
Love the antihero It shows dark side gives powerful attacks but doesn’t lose humanity but light side is sleek and smooth but turns you into a machine Thank you author this a book I’ve been looking for
Love the dialogue between Sharrk Ti and Darth, however bit confuse on where the MC stand in this universe. I'm feeling a romantic plots blossoming between Sharrk Ti and Darth or maybe it's a "Big Sis looking after an lost child " plot. If you planning to add romance, I won't recommend that so early into the story cuz we still ain't got no clue who the MC is or how deep or shallow, he might be. Highly Recommend for people who got some time on their hand(For Now) Has it flaws but worth wild reading. Keep up the work Author.
Trash fic with misleading title. MC doesn’t deserve to be called a Darth, he’s a sith pretender. He forced Boba Fett to pay a mechanic that tried to steal their ship after fixing it. When we finally got to see him act like a real sith for once by beating up and torturing a sith girl that mocked and tried to kill him he throws it all down the drain by getting ashamed of his actions under the disappointed and dissatisfied gaze of a JEDI WOMAN. He kept the sith girl alive and wasted a high grade healing potion on her because he FELT responsible for her and also to appease Shaak Ti’s dissatisfication. Shaak Ti simp. (Already has a force bond with her) He calls himself a Darth yet he plans to spare the sith girl a second time if she tries to kill him, fowking clown. All his threats, plans and acting like a cold pragmatic sith is fake which is evident when Shaaki Ti reads his TRUE feelings through their force bond. He acts like a tsundere bwch. The fic would have been good if he didn’t call himself a sith a lord. Misleading title, fake sith, fake darth and simp tsundere mc.