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Bloodicys
Bloodicys
3 days ago
Replied to Magic_Author

I already caught up to the latest chapter after commenting this, before deciding to drop it. I liked it so far, except for this part. You could've added more drama by showing her trying to earn his forgiveness, with him being resentful and working through it. He eventually forgives her, but he never treats her closely again, because at the end of the day, he suffered a lot because of her, and some wounds just can't be healed. Close, but still distant at the same time. Considering he endured neglect as a child and whatever happened to him in Essos, wouldn't it naturally make him resentful toward her? I could stick around, but I don't see myself enjoying his future interactions with her, given how things ended. Try to flesh out the drama more instead of wrapping it up with some words he heard from his master, ending it so fast.

"I love you. That is all that matters," I said, all of my resentments leaving my heart like a waterfall.

House of The Dragon: The blind warrior

House of The Dragon: The blind warrior

Book&Literature · Magic_Author

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
4 days ago
Commented

You’ve got to be kidding me. Neglect is forgiven just like that? I was already skeptical about the way he acted with her at first, but this does it. Disappointing chapter, I don’t think I’ll continue seeing how this trash was concluded.

"I love you. That is all that matters," I said, all of my resentments leaving my heart like a waterfall.

House of The Dragon: The blind warrior

House of The Dragon: The blind warrior

Book&Literature · Magic_Author

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
11 days ago
Commented

Is Rhaella going to be the mistress? Ngl, I thought it would be Kinvara, but this works. Having Targ women only so no other house gains power and a dragon like the Velaryons from the dance. Thanks for the chapter.

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
14 days ago
Replied to Rav_Zoldyck

From SBS 56: O: Ah, right. Now that you mention it, she's 139, isn't she? Well, if we say that the limit for a normal person is 140 years, she's still superhuman, in the sense that she goes beyond other people. So she'll be fine. Also, old people who will die in a year do not walk around in the snow with bare midriffs.

In the seventh year, the old king's health deteriorated rapidly. At over eighty years old, his condition was to be expected.

One Piece: Wielder of the Void

One Piece: Wielder of the Void

Anime & Comics · iamxeno

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
18 days ago
Replied to Nuh_Uhh

They were gambling on the fact that he couldn’t use it because of his fear of going blind. Safe to say they bet wrong. (They talked about it in the previous chapter or the one before it).

They were now outside the Four Red Yang Formation!

Evil Uchiha Itsuki

Evil Uchiha Itsuki

Anime & Comics · Ilham_Yamin

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
19 days ago
Replied to Targaryen_Official

I noticed you described his eyes as violet in one of the early paragraphs where he’s gazing at his men. You might wanna fix that lol

Kaelen's golden eyes narrowed as he considered the situation. Then, turning to face his crew, he barked his orders, "Men, you know what to do! Let's remind these scum what justice looks like!" A resounding cheer erupted from the marines. "Yes, Vice-Admiral!"

One Piece: Admiral 'Eclipse'

One Piece: Admiral 'Eclipse'

Anime & Comics · Targaryen_Official

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
19 days ago
Commented

Are his eyes changing colors because of his DF?

Kaelen's golden eyes narrowed as he considered the situation. Then, turning to face his crew, he barked his orders, "Men, you know what to do! Let's remind these scum what justice looks like!" A resounding cheer erupted from the marines. "Yes, Vice-Admiral!"

One Piece: Admiral 'Eclipse'

One Piece: Admiral 'Eclipse'

Anime & Comics · Targaryen_Official

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
1 months ago
Posted

He tries to act cold and aloof, complaining about other people making decisions for him and invading his personal space, yet he allows them to do so. He mostly goes with the flow and ends up joining Luffy's crew. He's nothing but a tsundere bwch.

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
1 months ago
Posted

Everything about this is peak. I’d give it 5 stars, but I’m not a fan of flashbacks. Honestly, it would’ve been better if you started from his childhood up to now instesd of introducing stuff via flashbacks, but that’s just my personal opinion.

Bloodicys
Bloodicys
1 months ago
Replied to Jibberflex

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For her age, her thoughts were quite depraved, but she was a Dornishwoman, and she had grown up with people who were a little too free to experiment with things even at a very young age.

GoT: The Blessed and the Cursed

GoT: The Blessed and the Cursed

Book&Literature · FateDevilAce

  • Game of Thrones: The Dragon Twins original

    Game of Thrones: The Dragon Twins

    TV ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION MAGIC ANTIHERO KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER DRAGON HIGHIQ GAME OF THRONES

    Desmond Eves, a 27 years old war veteran dies from artillery shell explosions and reincarnates into game of thrones as Daeron Targaryen, the twin brother of Daenerys Targaryen. 284 AC, Dragonstone. After Rhaella Targaryen birthed twins, a huge storm hit dragonstone threatening to split the island apart destroying the Targaryen fleet in its wake. In her arms lay two beautiful babes sleeping soundly, staring at them with love and affection, one of the twins slowly woke up showing two pairs of beautiful violet eyes that gleamed with intelligence and curiosity staring back at her before quickly drifting back to sleep. She chuckles lovingly looking at them with a sad smile and tears running down her face before naming the boy Daeron Targaryen and the girl Daenerys Targaryen. Looking at them, she reluctantly hands her children over to one of her most trusted dragonguard and orders him to take her children away from this place drawing her last breath. The guard kneels down sadly before getting up holding the twins and hurrying off to drag young Viserys to board a ship and set sail to Essos. Plunged in a bloody world full of schemes and treachery where everyone is a pawn on someone’s board, will he be able to survive and protect himself and his sister from the usurper or better yet, play the game of thrones and conquer the known world? Follow Daeron Targaryen as he begins his conquest with Fire and Blood. ———————————— #Incest English isn’t my first language so if you find any grammatical errors please tell me so I can correct it. I plan to focus the kingdom building part on Essos since not many fanfics do that. The updates will be slow and irregular because I’ll be focusing on uni.

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