You’ve got to be kidding me. Neglect is forgiven just like that? I was already skeptical about the way he acted with her at first, but this does it. Disappointing chapter, I don’t think I’ll continue seeing how this trash was concluded.
"I love you. That is all that matters," I said, all of my resentments leaving my heart like a waterfall.
Book&Literature · Magic_Author
Is Rhaella going to be the mistress? Ngl, I thought it would be Kinvara, but this works. Having Targ women only so no other house gains power and a dragon like the Velaryons from the dance. Thanks for the chapter.
From SBS 56: O: Ah, right. Now that you mention it, she's 139, isn't she? Well, if we say that the limit for a normal person is 140 years, she's still superhuman, in the sense that she goes beyond other people. So she'll be fine. Also, old people who will die in a year do not walk around in the snow with bare midriffs.
In the seventh year, the old king's health deteriorated rapidly. At over eighty years old, his condition was to be expected.
Anime & Comics · iamxeno
They were gambling on the fact that he couldn’t use it because of his fear of going blind. Safe to say they bet wrong. (They talked about it in the previous chapter or the one before it).
They were now outside the Four Red Yang Formation!
Anime & Comics · Ilham_Yamin
I noticed you described his eyes as violet in one of the early paragraphs where he’s gazing at his men. You might wanna fix that lol
Kaelen's golden eyes narrowed as he considered the situation. Then, turning to face his crew, he barked his orders, "Men, you know what to do! Let's remind these scum what justice looks like!" A resounding cheer erupted from the marines. "Yes, Vice-Admiral!"
Anime & Comics · Targaryen_Official
Are his eyes changing colors because of his DF?
Kaelen's golden eyes narrowed as he considered the situation. Then, turning to face his crew, he barked his orders, "Men, you know what to do! Let's remind these scum what justice looks like!" A resounding cheer erupted from the marines. "Yes, Vice-Admiral!"
Anime & Comics · Targaryen_Official
He tries to act cold and aloof, complaining about other people making decisions for him and invading his personal space, yet he allows them to do so. He mostly goes with the flow and ends up joining Luffy's crew. He's nothing but a tsundere bwch.
Everything about this is peak. I’d give it 5 stars, but I’m not a fan of flashbacks. Honestly, it would’ve been better if you started from his childhood up to now instesd of introducing stuff via flashbacks, but that’s just my personal opinion.
For her age, her thoughts were quite depraved, but she was a Dornishwoman, and she had grown up with people who were a little too free to experiment with things even at a very young age.
Book&Literature · FateDevilAce
I already caught up to the latest chapter after commenting this, before deciding to drop it. I liked it so far, except for this part. You could've added more drama by showing her trying to earn his forgiveness, with him being resentful and working through it. He eventually forgives her, but he never treats her closely again, because at the end of the day, he suffered a lot because of her, and some wounds just can't be healed. Close, but still distant at the same time. Considering he endured neglect as a child and whatever happened to him in Essos, wouldn't it naturally make him resentful toward her? I could stick around, but I don't see myself enjoying his future interactions with her, given how things ended. Try to flesh out the drama more instead of wrapping it up with some words he heard from his master, ending it so fast.
"I love you. That is all that matters," I said, all of my resentments leaving my heart like a waterfall.
House of The Dragon: The blind warrior
Book&Literature · Magic_Author