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Synopsis
A high school student gets into an accident that changes his life for the better or worse.
This is my first fic so I would love it if the readers would leave some advice and criticism.
Also English isn't my first language.
First Person POV
Multi POV
/Note: I don't own the rights to the picture and to the characters used in this fic beside the OC
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État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
-- Classement
Power Stone 
-- Power
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3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Okay now here is the thing with this story I liked the idea of having a person wanting revenge for the harm that Spider-man caused him but I didn’t enjoy when we turned into a spider monster now that took me out of the story I thought that we were going to be a human and have even greater powers than peter and having the Mc hunting spider-man and may join forces with him in dire universe threatening situations.
hmm cant say i hate or love it ... just to much emo feels all the time ... the "mc" turn into a monster kills everyone he knows ah and lets not forget he kill small children blabla and it keeps going on ... to much emo lol