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Synopsis
I became a Riser Phenex, and I am about to marry Rias Gremory.
What should I do?
It's obvious, right?
I want a divorce.
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Another Akikan's fanfic? LEZZGOOOO!!!! It's good that i listen to my instinct and have looked at your profile
A typical Akikan story. You can expect a complete hypocrite and self-entitled protagonist. The system sucks as it forces the character into being a villain (which goes against the story's title). The character goes unpunished for his attitude and acts recklessly even though Sirzechs would kill him regardless of the consequences for treating his sister like this (and he would make sure the engagement doesn't go through.) The character also somehow is much, much stronger than the actual Riser despite just reincarnating... Blue fire? "Mirage" clones? Instead of panicking and acting weird, he's confident and rolls with everything that goes his way, destroying any sense of realism. It's a story that's quite a bit worse than the others, even though the quality of the language has improved.
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I'm shocked that it has such a high score, it's frankly bad fanfic, one of the worst I've read, at first I wanted to give 3 stars, because the frequency of updates, but I think that this story is not worthy of such a high rating, so 1
@akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.
Shortly: Tasteless/boring. Akikan wrote fic about politics and kingdom building, I think you all know what happened lol. Everything seems to be made by kid that talks about serious things he/she can’t understand. Too naive and childish. Also, mc building his force is made of total cliche.
This fic have high rating is a mind breaking it self.First the freaking system, just the worst you know the usual system slave and plot convenient maker.There's no consistency on story, somehow he knew character from season 4 or so, when he only watch 1st season.I give 2 star for the effort typing the words.
This story was pretty good at the beginning, I really like the idea of someone being reincarnated as Riser, but the MC's personality is boring and very annoying, plus it's been over 30 chapters that I don't see anything important happening, she It's pretty boring overall, but I won't completely abandon it yet (if it gets better, I'll change the grade)
I'll be honest here, the story started out cool and all but I'm completely hating the path akikan is taking it down. The whole development started well but when it got to chapters 100 to 115 it simply lost most of the shine that made me want to keep reading, frankly I found it disappointing
Writing Quality - 2 stars ⭐ ⭐ As it is written like its for 10 years old with every little thing being repeated multiple times, every chapter is just filled with just same thing being told little bit differently.Story Development - 2 stars ⭐ ⭐ Since there is not any actual development in the story its just the same thing being repeated multiple time with the same ending.Character Design - 3 stars ⭐ ⭐ He doesn't have any proper character design it changes according to the plot that is happening. Updating Stability - 4 stars ⭐ ⭐ As there are 2 chapter per day but the actual content in these chapters is very less.World Background- 3 stars ⭐ ⭐ It's just the normal dxd world but the characters don't really feel like themselves.
This is Frustrating asf, bro just give him one option, it doesn't make sense that you make him choose btw 3 options if we all know which one he will choose💀
The first three or so chapter of this story was fantastic, but as the story continued the quality of writing decreased. The scenes and scenario of certain chapters are rushed a bit, and there isn't much detailed interaction to see what the perspective and emotion of the characters entail, except the author implying it giving us a brief wording of it. This story has potential, though the interactions that the MC has with his system seem a bit forced at times compared to previous chapters.
Another story from akikan, looking forward ❤ ..............................................................................................
I really hate your choice system!!! always taking most boring choice ajd rewards!!
the system is a massive turn off because of the contrast between the rewards and tasks. it's a three choice system with penalties for not choosing or failing and EVERY single time it's always the third choice with the other two being impossible to do.
The first 1-30 chapters were nice and refreshing too read, now I'm up too chapter 100 and it's all just useless yapping and useless rewards that he barely uses
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well the 3.8 star because the mc kind of suck I mean he is a devil(former human) but he can not get pass of his own personal feeling , he want a happy and peaceful life but can't get it, he is simply a softly and he has a villain system, still he will be a decent hero( and even a good one) but as a host of villain system he is just not fit to be a villain.....well I am still reading it so.......
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It 's very boring to read this fanfic , honestly people are just enjoying it because they are bots or because it 's DxD , the MC is a doll being dictated by his system , the system itself is nothing much , the options do not make sense to exist since he does not have the power of choice, it will always be the obvious option, the rewards also do not value the mentioned proposals. It's frustrating how bad the author is writing after MC Haru's FanFic, fell absurdly after finishing MC Ichijou Yuuki's. Totally frustrated with these FanFic with mc with god complex. I'm only reading the fanfics because I hope the author writes something good someday.