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To any who want to start this fic I just want you to know that the MC, despite having a very loving wife in Sona, and an approved harem, decided to still have an affair with Akeno less that 6 months into his marriage simply because of her breast size. Make of that what you will
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It's interesting so far. I'll keep reading this in the future............................................................................................
I am surprised that such a disgusting fanfic managed to score so high. It is just another generic harem and god complex fanfic with no creativity, generic, one-sided and self-centred as hell. It is super childish and reads as if it was written by a child author.
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While there were many problems in character development and the power ups and illogical reactions and dialogues, the fact that the writer finished the story is commendable. I personally really liked it .
5/5 it has its ups and downs and some chaps you might skim through but overall 5⭐️
Aunque el final fue algo apurado y abierto, en serio yo esperaba una batalla final que durará muchos capítulos y un cierre más complejo que huir, en serio...envés de confrontar al mundo, decide huir a su propio mundo. Pero bueno, me entretuvo mientras duró.
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It's one of the best books I've ever read. Its humor, writing, and continuity met my expectations perfectly. In some books, the hero eventually dies, it saddens unnecessarily, it bores people, there is no unnecessary drama and sadness in this book...
i admit I am biased since this is akikan...but truthfully this is way better than the current one..that 1 I even drop..but this is very nice just wish mc had happy endings but oh well
It is an interesting story, the autor however decided to have a pokemon kind of harem with a lot of woman having a really shallow relationship becoming somewhat unnecessary I mean why would you maintain a peerage that you would not even bother to develop It? but overall It is interesting with a trashy ending
The story is interesting, the problem is that the development of the races, sometimes Mc himself, are inconsistent. In the fic it says that Mc knows about the world but then in parts as simple as knowing who the heroines are he forgets it, there is also the issue of the demonic race that they are born with a limit of demonic power and that they cannot overcome it, although train you will not be able to exceed that limit.
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I enjoyed this book, even though it's not perfect. It evoked a variety of emotions in me. I recommend this book despite the large number of negative comments. (If you don't like it, don't read it, why throw a tantrum in the comments?)
It was a really good read and i want to thank akikan for another great fanfic. But I think the end was not that great And i feel a little lost now
I enjoyed reading this dxd fanfiction but everything got ruined in the chapter 233 and 234 ..... chapter order got wrong by author. Well I try to read even further as I I tried to make sense but failed. sigh..... so if there is someone out who read it from chapter 234 can u give me order of chapter
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A bit disappointed with the ending, so this will probably the only one I won't re-read again from your fics. I liked the rewards he got as well as how you did his interactions and relationship with characters like Vali, Meredith, and Ophis (these three were the ones that came into my mind first) but man is the Issei and World Will thing such a massive turn-off.
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Una vrg mi compa la neta eres una reata jaja . Eres una chingoneria Siempre he leído tus historias Me encantan gracias x los capítulos tristes divertidos y demás fue lo mejor de lo mejor
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 El mejor final.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. Sinceramente no entendí nada, pero de que está bueno, está bueno. Solo que seguiré demandando un fanfic de Date A Live.
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No soy fanático de las historias con MC Villano pero esta historia era simplemente adictiva y no podía dejar de leerla. Muy buena historia y desarrollo de personaje, no solo del MC sino también de los otros personajes. Si tuviera que decir un defecto que me molestó fue la personalidad exageradamente contradictoria del MC, dice todo el tiempo que quiere una vida tranquila pero parece que siempre trata de buscar alguien nuevo de quien vengarse. Además, en mi punto de vista, las venganzas son demasiado exageradas en algunos casos o por motivos demasiado simples. Por ejemplo lo que pasó con Diehauser, solo trató de hablarle educadamente, pero en lugar de ser educado eligió difamar a la familia Belial y empezó a preguntarse si debería matar a Diehauser, lo mismo en el torneo, su comentario fue demasiado simple y todos querían crucificarlo por eso. Puedo entender lo de Sirzechs o Issei, pero en mi opinión Diehauser no hizo nada para ser catalogado como enemigo del MC(antes de la traición). Me gusta la actitud que eligieron tomar Michael y los ángeles, es un buen cambio de las historias usuales. En cuanto al final, le doy un 9/10, normalmente no me gustan los finales donde se reinicia el mundo sin recuerdos(de los demás personajes) porque es como tirar toda la historia previa a la basura, pero en este caso me gustó el final porque se borra todo el historial villano del protagonista y puede volver a construir sus relaciones sin tener que mentir, engañar o matar a alguien cercano.
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The dxd world is one of the easiest to exploit, that's why no one puts effort into the story and just copies the same plot. So it is a little disappointing that the same thing happens in this story, the protagonist is a child and a slave to a system, the plot is very simplistic and without charisma, as well as embarrassing.
It must certainly be exhausting to make a story and publish it every day so my advice is to leave it for a while. This story is very bad, there are some saving moments but they are very few compared to the ridiculous and embarrassing ones, the protagonist acts like a child, the system is the worst and the infection with the characters is nothing like canon.
To any who want to start this fic I just want you to know that the MC, despite having a very loving wife in Sona, and an approved harem, decided to still have an affair with Akeno less that 6 months into his marriage simply because of her breast size. Make of that what you will
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It's interesting so far. I'll keep reading this in the future............................................................................................
I am surprised that such a disgusting fanfic managed to score so high. It is just another generic harem and god complex fanfic with no creativity, generic, one-sided and self-centred as hell. It is super childish and reads as if it was written by a child author.
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While there were many problems in character development and the power ups and illogical reactions and dialogues, the fact that the writer finished the story is commendable. I personally really liked it .
5/5 it has its ups and downs and some chaps you might skim through but overall 5⭐️
Aunque el final fue algo apurado y abierto, en serio yo esperaba una batalla final que durará muchos capítulos y un cierre más complejo que huir, en serio...envés de confrontar al mundo, decide huir a su propio mundo. Pero bueno, me entretuvo mientras duró.
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It's one of the best books I've ever read. Its humor, writing, and continuity met my expectations perfectly. In some books, the hero eventually dies, it saddens unnecessarily, it bores people, there is no unnecessary drama and sadness in this book...
i admit I am biased since this is akikan...but truthfully this is way better than the current one..that 1 I even drop..but this is very nice just wish mc had happy endings but oh well
It is an interesting story, the autor however decided to have a pokemon kind of harem with a lot of woman having a really shallow relationship becoming somewhat unnecessary I mean why would you maintain a peerage that you would not even bother to develop It? but overall It is interesting with a trashy ending
The story is interesting, the problem is that the development of the races, sometimes Mc himself, are inconsistent. In the fic it says that Mc knows about the world but then in parts as simple as knowing who the heroines are he forgets it, there is also the issue of the demonic race that they are born with a limit of demonic power and that they cannot overcome it, although train you will not be able to exceed that limit.
Spoiler de révélation I enjoyed this book, even though it's not perfect. It evoked a variety of emotions in me. I recommend this book despite the large number of negative comments. (If you don't like it, don't read it, why throw a tantrum in the comments?)
It was a really good read and i want to thank akikan for another great fanfic. But I think the end was not that great And i feel a little lost now
I enjoyed reading this dxd fanfiction but everything got ruined in the chapter 233 and 234 ..... chapter order got wrong by author. Well I try to read even further as I I tried to make sense but failed. sigh..... so if there is someone out who read it from chapter 234 can u give me order of chapter
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A bit disappointed with the ending, so this will probably the only one I won't re-read again from your fics. I liked the rewards he got as well as how you did his interactions and relationship with characters like Vali, Meredith, and Ophis (these three were the ones that came into my mind first) but man is the Issei and World Will thing such a massive turn-off.
Spoiler de révélation Una vrg mi compa la neta eres una reata jaja . Eres una chingoneria Siempre he leído tus historias Me encantan gracias x los capítulos tristes divertidos y demás fue lo mejor de lo mejor
Spoiler de révélation 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 El mejor final.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. Sinceramente no entendí nada, pero de que está bueno, está bueno. Solo que seguiré demandando un fanfic de Date A Live.
Spoiler de révélation No soy fanático de las historias con MC Villano pero esta historia era simplemente adictiva y no podía dejar de leerla. Muy buena historia y desarrollo de personaje, no solo del MC sino también de los otros personajes. Si tuviera que decir un defecto que me molestó fue la personalidad exageradamente contradictoria del MC, dice todo el tiempo que quiere una vida tranquila pero parece que siempre trata de buscar alguien nuevo de quien vengarse. Además, en mi punto de vista, las venganzas son demasiado exageradas en algunos casos o por motivos demasiado simples. Por ejemplo lo que pasó con Diehauser, solo trató de hablarle educadamente, pero en lugar de ser educado eligió difamar a la familia Belial y empezó a preguntarse si debería matar a Diehauser, lo mismo en el torneo, su comentario fue demasiado simple y todos querían crucificarlo por eso. Puedo entender lo de Sirzechs o Issei, pero en mi opinión Diehauser no hizo nada para ser catalogado como enemigo del MC(antes de la traición). Me gusta la actitud que eligieron tomar Michael y los ángeles, es un buen cambio de las historias usuales. En cuanto al final, le doy un 9/10, normalmente no me gustan los finales donde se reinicia el mundo sin recuerdos(de los demás personajes) porque es como tirar toda la historia previa a la basura, pero en este caso me gustó el final porque se borra todo el historial villano del protagonista y puede volver a construir sus relaciones sin tener que mentir, engañar o matar a alguien cercano.
Spoiler de révélation The dxd world is one of the easiest to exploit, that's why no one puts effort into the story and just copies the same plot. So it is a little disappointing that the same thing happens in this story, the protagonist is a child and a slave to a system, the plot is very simplistic and without charisma, as well as embarrassing.
It must certainly be exhausting to make a story and publish it every day so my advice is to leave it for a while. This story is very bad, there are some saving moments but they are very few compared to the ridiculous and embarrassing ones, the protagonist acts like a child, the system is the worst and the infection with the characters is nothing like canon.
It was great then it became just meh.