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Reincarnation in TDG(I have corrected the spelling errors.)
3.36 (17 audimat)
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An 18-year-old boy died. His life was boring and he wondered when he was going to die. He was locked up in the dark for billions of years without being able to do anything. A light allowed him to reincarnate in a world of his choice but without any cheating.///////// I am doing another Fan fiction at the same time so I will only release 1 chapters per day.///////// English is not my mother tongue so excuse me for writing./////// Thank you for supporting me for the future.
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I think that this novel has a lot of potential and that it could go a long way the only thing I would change is that it to fast pace, I felt that the author is trying to rush the story very much and what I don't understand is wasn't he in the ''void'' for million of years but he didn't talk about it when he reincarnated and didn't it say that he made a cultivation while he was in the dark space why isn't he using that instead of his new created one.
I'm starting to like the story continue with harem plotline with main characters ziyun,ninger,and his sister and Yang Xi n. Waiting for more updates.
Writing is pretty bad, a lot he/she mistakes and the formatting feels dry(only narrating and the conversations are like game prompts if not worse). It has a stable update schedule. The story is terrible, it goes fast, the mc is a genius for some reason just by thinking on a topic or it's history which makes no sense. The characters are blank, they feel almost robotic, you can expect what they will do and how they will react with no problem, like mc wants to get noticed, he will, mc wants to no get noticed, he won't. Simple as that. The world makes no sense, somehow the MC just by thinking about a story knows the ins and outs of the systems it's developed on, for example he knows how to be a blacksmith, alchemist, how to develop new cultivation techniques even though he only first properly saw them when he entered a world, he can develop a THOUSAND alchemy recepies... It just makes no sense.
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He create spiritual something pill that could accelerate the cultivation of black gold rank and share that to alchemist assoc. Even though he himself is only in silver rank. So stupid mc. Like someone said. "Beating your d*ck is better than reading this"
I'm lazy, so i just copy paste other review It is... just empty powertrip. There are quite a few stories where people are putting some thought into it. This particular story is just random powerups for no reason. MC has no cheat, but Library of Heaven's Path (quite a common trend in recent TDG fanfics) cannot hold a candle to this MC. He reads his clan library, learns random languages in a day or so. When he decides to create technique for himself/whoever, he will create super powerful ones from the crumbs of knowledge he finds here. Wants to go and become Alchemist - no issue, just create 1000 recipes out of ass. So it is like that. If you want to follow MC powering up like there's no tomorrow, etc. - you've come to the right place. If you are looking for some consistency, thought, reason - run away.
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It’s a ****ty story the only thing the main character ever does is bash on Nie Lie list always either oh he is an idiot for not doing this, oh I just got something that I will be about to use to make something better then what he found, or oh he is an idiot for only choosing 1 girl instead of all of them. It’s completely repetitive and honestly very annoying not to mention they there are constantly phrases put into the story that don’t make sense in English or they are just formatted wrong.
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This is just terrible. The grammar, the spelling, the character, the premise. It is just awful. The MC isn't supposed to have a cheat but can read thousands of books without forgetting any, learn ancient languages in a month and spot flaws in cultivation techniques despite only having just encountered them for the first time. It's pretty obvious that this is a crossover with Library of Heaven's Path, but it has been done before by massively better writers. In conclusion, don't read this.
I think that this novel has a lot of potential and that it could go a long way the only thing I would change is that it to fast pace, I felt that the author is trying to rush the story very much and what I don't understand is wasn't he in the ''void'' for million of years but he didn't talk about it when he reincarnated and didn't it say that he made a cultivation while he was in the dark space why isn't he using that instead of his new created one.
I'll be honest there is probably a good or at least decent story here. The problem is the author fails to properly express it. I'm pretty sure English isn't the authors' first language and knowing that to a certain degree I'm more forgiving when errors are made in spelling and grammar. This, however, is pretty terrible in that aspect. The usual mistake in gender happens constantly not even consistent in the same sentence. There are plenty of misused terms even for basic concepts of TDG like the professions and cultivation types. One example is Inscriptions being called Registration and again it is simply not consistent changing within the same sentence or paragraph. Another is the Nightmare Demon Pot being constantly referred to as an oven. Worst and what caused me to give up reading is after going looking for Yu Yan finds her who then acts like some kind of quest giver the reward being learning laws, Once MC is offered to enter the pond where Yu Yan's real body is it gives you her description and finishes it of calling it the body of a man. The last complaint is about how the MC goes about everything. There is no reason for it. Him creating techniques then repeatedly improving on them to reach an ultimate technique has no reason behind it. Aside from how long he spent in the void with only his imagination and therefor stronger soul, nothing is explained. It is completely left to the reader to guess how he was able to do it. Hell, he went to the Tomb after telling his dad he was going to the academy library. He is then gone for 10 days, and no-one questions it, wtf. So advice to the author; Get Grammarly. If you use your phone, write somewhere else then copy and paste it to the app. Keep the TDG wiki open, and make sure you use the correct terms and names. Explain! Explain why explain how. Make sure to give enough details that even an idiot can understand. Never assume because you know, that everyone else will.
J'ai hate de lire la suite. Continue comme ca. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Man, could you explain me just one thing, how could you say at the title "without cheating", if the mc just passed one billion of years at the void creating thechniches and other things,dont is this a big hack?
this novel possesses a lot of potential as long as the grammar is improved a little. the mc has the potential to be more OP than Nie Li. i just hope it's the first timeline and not the second.
I think that this novel has a lot of potential and that it could go a long way the only thing I would change is that it to fast pace, I felt that the author is trying to rush the story very much and what I don't understand is wasn't he in the ''void'' for million of years but he didn't talk about it when he reincarnated and didn't it say that he made a cultivation while he was in the dark space why isn't he using that instead of his new created one.
I think that this novel has a lot of potential and that it could go a long way the only thing I would change is that it to fast pace, I felt that the author is trying to rush the story very much and what I don't understand is wasn't he in the ''void'' for million of years but he didn't talk about it when he reincarnated and didn't it say that he made a cultivation while he was in the dark space why isn't he using that instead of his new created one.
It is... just empty powertrip. There are quite a few stories where people are putting some thought into it. This particular story is just random powerups for no reason. MC has no cheat, but Library of Heaven's Path (quite a common trend in recent TDG fanfics) cannot hold a candle to this MC. He reads his clan library, learns random languages in a day or so. When he decides to create technique for himself/whoever, he will create super powerful ones from the crumbs of knowledge he finds here. Wants to go and become Alchemist - no issue, just create 1000 recipes out of ass. So it is like that. If you want to follow MC powering up like there's no tomorrow, etc. - you've come to the right place. If you are looking for some consistency, thought, reason - run away.