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one piece :my Version
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in this story luffy will ate 10 devil fruits 5 before the time skip and 5 after the time skip he will also train under shanks before his journey and all the 5 fruits before the time skip will be an insanely powerful mutated devil fruits. you can read this if you like an insanely op mc
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Yeahh.....No this is bad ....seriously if you make him that strong where is the meaning of the journey ...just go to new world and wreck everything.
NO MAN. JUST NO. I LIKE EVERYONE LIKES OP FANFIC AND INNOVATIVE DF IDEAS. BUT THERE ARE LIMITS TO BS YOUR WAY OUT OF YOUR STORY. EVEN THESE THING SHO7LD HAVE LIMITS. I KHLNOW THERE ARE EVEN WORSE STORIES OUT THERE BUT JUST THE CONCEPT OF 10 DF LUFFY IS FKD UP. I AM SORRY IF MY REVIEW HURTS YOU BUT IT IS JUST MY OWN OPINION AFTER GOING THROUGH THE CHAPTERS. AGAING I AIN'T BASHING YOU BUT JUST STATING MY OWN OPINION.