/ Anime & Comics / One Piece : I Am Really Crocodile ?
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Rosen passed through and became Crocodile. He has no inherited memory and will not be domineering. The protagonist has gone to sea. He is panicking now. More importantly, his plan to capture Arabistan is about to come to an end. Robin asked him what to do? How do I know what to do? This Qiwuhai is probably going to be cold…
by White light on finger tips (MTL)
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Robin: what should we do..? Croc: You are asking me ... who tf should I be asking.... 🤣🙌😂 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Repulsed from the very first paragraph, tried to bear it and read along but disgusted by the next ones. Idk about the story, but the translation is no better than mtl. Heck, it may be copied directly from mtl. No hard feelings for the translator, but this one simply bad.
It’s good, but the grammar mistakes take over the story. It feels like a google translated chinese story. Except that the story is good, Crocodile is an interesting character with lots of potential.
I'm giving 3.8 but I should give less because I find the story interesting even though I know it's not yours. so author you said you are translating right? well if so why don't you change this quiwai to shichibukai ?to me it seems you took it from mtl and posted here saying it is your translation, i may be wrong but if you really are translating then errors like this one would not appear so much. just a tip if you're really translating go on mtl and see the most obvious mistakes and then change to what makes the most sense in the context it will be much better even if it's not perfect to read this fanfic (google tranlation)
Crocodile revealed he wasnt the original in chapter 3, that kinda ruined the whole reading experience for me. However, just because I didnt like the direction doesnt mean its a bad fanfic. Writing quality may need some improvements and leading up to the third chapter it was a realy good read!
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I've finally finished reading the raws, I'm not gonna comment on the writing quality either on this website nor on the raws, as raws are usually bad writing quality. I honestly enjoyed the overall feeling of the novel, there are some stuff I'm slightly bitter about but nothing too big or much. Rosen (mc) / Crocodile as a character worked really well into the story, and the story had him as a main focus and didn't set focus on Straw Hats (which I liked that the focus was only on Crocodile). As One Piece isn't finished yet, the author had to make his own twist, which worked pretty well, and the author changed some parts into the story too. all in all, a really enjoyable read.
Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
Only English or Chinese plz...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
From the very beginning of reading, there were vague doubts, especially at the moment of chambord islands, when I reached qiwuhai, everything fell into place, and I dropped this work in advance until blood flowed from my eyes.