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ONE PIECE: Game Game No Mi
4.36 (34 audimat)
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Waking up into a world full of death, mystery and adventure was not as fun as Kal first thought it would be. Travelling the seas with the only goal being survival and riches, he turns to bounty hunting to carve out his place in this new world.
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The story is overallmid. The main issue is the structure of the story and jist how freaking broken and unbalanced the system is. First of all, each reading of the story feels like i am reading an entire paragraph. It could have been shortened enough or used either 1 or 2 sentences. The first few chapters was pure info dump. As a story, the system completely is broken and unbalanced. He does a few certain actions and boom, high grade sword and powerful devil fruit. Heck, chapter 1 and he already has jack sparrows compass which is one of the most op items. Since he knows one piece, the whole limitations of the compass won't work. It feels more like he is actually buying the rewards directly instead of being a gacha. Sure Gamer systems are meant to make the mc strong fast but this is just ridiculous, how many chapters in and he already has high class weapons and a large number of devil fruits. I can pretty much say that the next thing he could be recdiving is the rokushiki and haki, all after only a number of chapters in. The whole weaktostrong tag doesn't really fit in to this story. The structure could be fix but the system is overall broken.
PLEASE🙏🏽🙏🏽release more frequently!! This is fr the best One Piece FF I’ve seen so far.
Rating may change but as of now it is almost at the stage where it was a waste of time reading. The author for some idiotic reason forces Vista to show up where the MC was and mane handled him. Vista’s POV has him thinking he is the MCs ”sensei” but then he almost crippled his left arm and cuts off two of his fingers. Just to clarify... A SWORDSMAN that was “training” another SWORDSMAN by cutting off his fingers. Mihawk lost interest in his duels with shanks because of his arm and he also only gave Zoro a massive scar on his chest. Vista lowered the MCs max fighting potential and it was forced and pointless. Also, the very next chapter he calls Vista back up just to start selling him devil fruits and future swords that he “finds”.… MC became pathetic. He should be selling to Whitebeard rivals and other tops sword users. Unfortunately, he is a b-tch.
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Honestly, it's a really good story, but leave some devil fruits for the rest of us.
Nice fanfic. Very good actually. Especially considering how rare good OC fanfics that doesn't follow original plot and main cast, are. One thing I don't like is gacha scaling. Too much, too fast, too easy in my opinion.
Well just 11 chapters in but it got me hooked. It will be interesting to see who will be in the MC's crew as he would need some real good members to even hope for sailing the Grand line.
Started out fine but lost interest really fast, didn't even get thou all the posted chapters
Author is really good at writing! Story development isnt that good, MC has a system which is very OP and MC is kinda obsessed with collecting OC devil fruits! The whole thing takes place 10 years after rogers death and MC has already altered main story too heavily!
I'd say give him a minor healing factor that can regenerate his fingers over a long period of time that would get his ``sensei´´ a fun face next time they meet XD oh and also why not have the Black Pearl in some hidden island with the skeleton of another reincarnate that made a name for Jack Sparrow a long time ago before Gol D. Roger could also have some notes an about poneglyfts there and a few journals of things and skill books that he could learn and perhaps get a title related to the whole thing and then connect the Black Pearl to the gamer and have it soul bound so the ship can be upgraded and then be operated as the Flying Dutchman.
honestly so far really like it can't wait for more and don't drop your doing great
So far I'm really liking this story it's pretty well balanced chapters are a good length there are a few small details are missed but nothing major.
Good idea, terrible development, the main problem is the system, it is super badly done, it returned the protagonist to a sword and devil fruit factory in the first 3 chapters and without any effort
the book is good enough chapters are long bad so the feeling of emptiness when it gets updated. The place I don't like is that it doesn't travel with the main characters, some find it ridiculous, but this is the story tour I like. at least he should have kidnapped nami and robin.
A masterpiece. Better than any other book ever made, Harry Potter who? Percy Jackson what? If you read this, every other piece of writing will become garbage to you. Source: Trust me bro ;)