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Auteur: Zereeo_Ak

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Hello, I am Zereeo_Ak.
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For the staffs from Royal Road, It is me who is trying to upload in your site. I also hope that I would be allowed to upload my other stories without trouble at your site.
Thank you.
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I am the author of this fanfic. This idea was inspired by a fellow author who is literally writing the story with a slightly different settings. I give him(Baphomet_19) credit for inspiring me. So, I won't listen to anyone saying I copied the story. (⌐■_■)
Even though the idea was inspired, I am taking the story in a new direction.
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Copyright.
And all the DC characters and elements belong to the DCcomics and all the Ben 10 elements belong to Man of Action. I do not own anything except my own original characters.
Check it out and see if I am doing a good work,(~ ̄▽ ̄)~
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Now to the story.
This story will focus on two lead,
1) Kara Zor-El (Supergirl), a time remnant(From The Flash movie), ending up in another earth after being saved by a mysterious being with the quest to fight to protect her new home.
2) Zion, a boy from the countryside who want to go on an adventure. His dream is full filled after he get an alien device that could change him into many forms, ( Yes, it's Omnitrix( omniverse version)) but at the same time he also learn that his world was not so big anymore.
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This story will also contain some of my original characters with their unique power, one for now. And If you have some questions or confusion, comment me. I am not well versed in DC universe setting.
So, I would really appreciate if you give me advice. Okay o( ̄▽ ̄)√.
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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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TyrantTron335

Mc has one he lets his allies know how much power he has, which is not a good thing. Everything is not problem in DC universe

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CaioBR

Man, the title really isn't catchy, but I decided to give it a chance and I was surprised. The novel is very good, especially the character interactions

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Zal01
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I like the ideas you incorporated with the mc, and his intellectual thinking capacity. He has a broad perspective and for me personally, the way everything plays out is very well constructed. I’m intrigued to c where this story goes, keep it up 👍

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P_J_Sch
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This is straight up Fire the way its done and executed are a good change from the norme plus the MC keeps a List of things to do or not to do

11mth
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_VOIDLESS_

I used to scroll past this one all the time because it didn't look interesting enough, now I am just glad I gave it a chance and it is not that bad it will sometime to get used but it worth it at the end

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SalveYing

I really liked the story. At first, I didn't understand why things were done a certain way, but then everything fit together magnificently. I like how you write the dialogues; they don't feel forced. I recommend it, keep up the good work.

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