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Man, the title really isn't catchy, but I decided to give it a chance and I was surprised. The novel is very good, especially the character interactions
I used to scroll past this one all the time because it didn't look interesting enough, now I am just glad I gave it a chance and it is not that bad it will sometime to get used but it worth it at the end
I really liked the story. At first, I didn't understand why things were done a certain way, but then everything fit together magnificently. I like how you write the dialogues; they don't feel forced. I recommend it, keep up the good work.
I like the ideas you incorporated with the mc, and his intellectual thinking capacity. He has a broad perspective and for me personally, the way everything plays out is very well constructed. I’m intrigued to c where this story goes, keep it up 👍
Mc has one he lets his allies know how much power he has, which is not a good thing. Everything is not problem in DC universe
This is straight up Fire the way its done and executed are a good change from the norme plus the MC keeps a List of things to do or not to do
The story started well but everything goes to waste when he goes to Mars with Kara to terraform it and begins a conquest of Mars and Luwgo of Earth, from there everything went down. The MC proposes a plan and then does something else, then chapters pass without knowing about him so he can read a little about what he will do but it doesn't work out, a good number of people start dying out of nowhere and everything gets horrible 4/10 for the story, I don't recommend it to people looking for something fairly serious to read or to those who read garbage for entertainment
Man, the title really isn't catchy, but I decided to give it a chance and I was surprised. The novel is very good, especially the character interactions
I used to scroll past this one all the time because it didn't look interesting enough, now I am just glad I gave it a chance and it is not that bad it will sometime to get used but it worth it at the end
I really liked the story. At first, I didn't understand why things were done a certain way, but then everything fit together magnificently. I like how you write the dialogues; they don't feel forced. I recommend it, keep up the good work.
I like the ideas you incorporated with the mc, and his intellectual thinking capacity. He has a broad perspective and for me personally, the way everything plays out is very well constructed. I’m intrigued to c where this story goes, keep it up 👍
Mc has one he lets his allies know how much power he has, which is not a good thing. Everything is not problem in DC universe
This is straight up Fire the way its done and executed are a good change from the norme plus the MC keeps a List of things to do or not to do
The story started well but everything goes to waste when he goes to Mars with Kara to terraform it and begins a conquest of Mars and Luwgo of Earth, from there everything went down. The MC proposes a plan and then does something else, then chapters pass without knowing about him so he can read a little about what he will do but it doesn't work out, a good number of people start dying out of nowhere and everything gets horrible 4/10 for the story, I don't recommend it to people looking for something fairly serious to read or to those who read garbage for entertainment