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New Origins
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Synopsis
A mysterious encounter resulted in four colleagues being transported to a whole new world, where magic thrives and danger lurks. The four young adults had to restart their lives from an infant stage, with newfound powers and bearing whole new identities that even their companions do not recognise.
Realising that they were bestowed with divine gifts pushing their talent and prowess far above the natives of the world, they quickly capitalised on that, moving on to rediscover and fulfill their innermost desires.
However, they would soon come to realise that this new world was not as simple as they imagined it to be.
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I like your way you describe the world. I can see myself being in the book. I can feel the atmosphere of the scenes. Good job to you and continue to write.
Decent Imagery and good vocabulary, however some parts of the story seems almost way too rushed, also i'm extremely curious as to how your somehow going to write and develop 4 characters! Looking forward to the development of your story! The Naked Dao Is The True Dao