2Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Decent Imagery and good vocabulary, however some parts of the story seems almost way too rushed, also i'm extremely curious as to how your somehow going to write and develop 4 characters! Looking forward to the development of your story! The Naked Dao Is The True Dao
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I like your way you describe the world. I can see myself being in the book. I can feel the atmosphere of the scenes. Good job to you and continue to write.
LV 4 ![Badge]()
Decent Imagery and good vocabulary, however some parts of the story seems almost way too rushed, also i'm extremely curious as to how your somehow going to write and develop 4 characters! Looking forward to the development of your story! The Naked Dao Is The True Dao
I like your way you describe the world. I can see myself being in the book. I can feel the atmosphere of the scenes. Good job to you and continue to write.