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Chapitre 211: Creating a Standard Soldier

When the attacks on the Kraken escalated, two figures could be seen floating at the dark, stormy seas. Unlike Cliff's team that used extreme balance and specific positioning to withstand the waves and wind, these two simply stood up casually over the waters.

"Looks like we made it on time." Sammy Theoden sighed in relief.

"That Seeker really knows how to create a good surprise. If he called us any later, we wouldn't have made it for this party." Richie smirked.

"What do we do with this force field? It seems like if you were to make a powerful attack, we'd get detected." Sammy asked.

"Just wait. There should be an instance when this force field will weaken. Don't underestimate those coming here. For one, Grant Hermes finally makes his appearance. He's been on my bounty book for years, but no one ever could have captured him. Of course, since he can fly, it's no surprise that no on managed to catch him!' Richie laughed.


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Phew! Finally done with all the "Creating a" chapters. Because I dedicated a chapter for this, I won't reiterate their skills.

That way I can skip the explanations and just focus on whats going on. Rather than waste word count in the typical LN way.

Imagine me repeating this phrase ten or twenty times in the future:

"The Snipers eye could see through the darkness of the battle. This was because they..."

OR

"The spies lies were powerful. Lowengren had trained them to have lies..."

I won 't be doing that. OK, guys?

Sadly though... I learned the hard way, that despite the fact that everyone in webnovel have read countless chapters from different books, they still haven't developed the ability to "read between the lines." I can't understand why a lot of readers are confused at what was happening in the first three chapters. Do I really have to say:

"In the future, there was a battle between Earth and an Alien race that attacked Earth. Earth sent General Seeker Carlean, who his close friends call him Zeek. He was known in the army as Death Tide Carlean."

I'm serious. A lot of people in the first three chapters were very very VERY frustrated at the fact that Seeker had three names (Seeker, Death Tide, and Zeek.) I mean, sure. By not giving him a "proper LN introduction" and leave the readers to read between the lines it would lead to some confusion, But how hard is it to connect Zeek to the name Seeker?! I swear. In my next novel. I will dumb down my story-telling styles. I overestimated the intellect of the masses. To use the millenial phrase "I can't even..."

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